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Alien Abduction Chapter 2 (1/3)
🕑 Added 2024-10-19 07:42:00 +0000 UTC(Updated) Added 8 new pages to this part.
I feel like I've gotten slower...
I wonder if the dialogues are natural. Looking over it so many times makes me unsure. Also, I wasn't too sure about what makeover I could give Hitomi, so the result seem kinda simple(?)
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Sorry everyone for such a long delay. Too many traveling, moving and life events have kept me busy this month making it difficult to sit down and draw.
I decided to skip my usual pencil sketching process and go straight into the inking line seeing as my sketch was already very clean enough. I think this should save time in the future as I won't need to draw the same thing twice albeit the line might be a little rougher.
I intended for this first part to be about 22 pages long but ran out of time so I could only post 14 pages. I'll update this post again when the rest of the pages are done, I'm so sorry once again.
It feels like the entirety of Alien Abduction 2 is getting a remake, but I want to try to reuse at least some of the sex scenes in the old version.
In this part, I wanted to show what happened before Hitomi went out shopping, and what she did at home after the Abduction. What do you all think of this new start to the chapter?
I would love to hear your thoughts please let me know in the comments or on the Discord server. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
Comments
Unknown
I came back at the right time then
mefihs
I believe that the school uniforms are extremely attractive. And maybe you can have more skirts and tight shirts.
Tatted11
I love the series! I’m a writer so if you ever need someone to review the dialogue or just bounce ideas off of I’d be happy to help!
Omega1918
I like the dialogue, the only reason it may feel unnatural is because Hitomi is a “fish out of water”. The only thing I find weird about the makeover is how similar Hitomi and Aki hair look after there makeovers from Eriko. I know the hair will look different after color but maybe that’s why the makeover feels odd.
gerard
soo good we support you and want more obviusly
Bluemoon_445
Every time I see AB, I want to see more...
Todd Crim
I love the interaction between the three of them you get a sense of a close friendship that hitome has no idea about and how to properly act
George
Sato is going to love her new look! Really looking forward to hitome being forced to do more girly things and becoming more submissive
Kian Stephenson-Beckett
Can't wait for it to be coloured this is the series that got me to join your patreon
ルナシバ
Your art has gotten so good! It was great before and it is better now! I hope you feel proud as well, it’s fantastic!
George
This is the best gender bender series I have ever seen
Omega1918
So far I like the added scenes, and I’m looking forward to what comes next. I am interested if you plan on adding any scenes between hitome and sato when they are at the beach. Some of my favorite scenes from part 3 are then at the gym before the sex starts
Arisa
Yes, just for a little while until I can get back to it, considering how many pages it has, it’s a little intimidating to work on.
Zanbato
The aliens are actually pretty nice, by giving her womens clothes When they turn me into a girl, hopefully they will also give me some nice dresses =)
Todd Crim
Great job as always. I love how you’re fleshing out the character so much. I can’t wait to see her character grow from a spoiled rich kid.
John J.
Love this! Is coloring for popularity 2 taking a backseat though?
MomoCat
I really appreciate the new pacing! It helps the story flow better, and I’ve become more invested in the characters and their backstories. I look forward to learning more about Sato and Hitomi/Hideki’s past relationship!
MangamanZX Call me Zed
Nice, honestly I do look forward to how you expand on Yuuko and Hina in this version of events
kendo44
Love the additional character development as it makes you more invested in the characters.
Arisane (Twicetale)
Turned out good
Bluemoon_445
Love your remake, more pleaseeeee 😭❤️
Kian Stephenson-Beckett
YESSSSS MORE OF MY FAVOURITE SERIES
