Changer
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New Avatar for Jane
🕑 Added 2016-04-03 19:56:40 +0000 UTC I've started working with an artist to try and improve the art in the game. While this artist is better than me, she also uses a different style, so, I figured I'd share the first avatar that's been finished to see what you all think of it. To see the version that isn't messed with by Patreon's automatic resizing, you can click here: http://i.imgur.com/ExDMzx8.png
Comments
Kuroihana
Nice work! I didn't have any problem with the visuals of the game so far, but this is superb! With your writing and this art could be the best of both worlds! Ps: (Even though I loved the little inside joke of the background with the houses. :P)
Darth Xelleon
Kawaii
Changer
I have not found out yet; she didn't have any examples on hand with nudity. I will probably try to get an example from her as soon as possible.
Changer
Yeah, I actually had her reduce the size of the eyes from the original draft, but I think she's a bit reluctant to do. I can see if she'll be willing to reduce the size of the eyes more.
ONI
It's better.... but can they draw tits?
DJ Quinn
The eyes look a bit too big compared to her nose and mouth. It's very distracting and draws attention away from everything else (everything, not just her nose and mouth). Other than that, It looks good.
