Dragon's Orphans
🕑 Added 2023-07-09 02:33:00 +0000 UTCI will be updating this post as I write more of
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Anita Bridges
Enjoyed reading it all together. Very concerned about where this is leading⦠tell your characters that I like happy endings please!
Chris Lock
The ride is never truly over.
Trekkie Monster
Another certified Chris Lock Emotional Rollercoaster. Please keep your heart inside the vehicle at all times until the story has come to a complete stop. Brb, crying.
Chris Lock
I'm so very glad you've enjoyed it. Sometimes I think I might want to take it back a touch but the characters just won't let me. š¤£
Andrew Chrapkiewicz
Every time, Chris... EVERY TIME! You take a character, a race, a creature, that we have preconceived notions of, and spiral it 180 degrees. Even with her demeanor as a Succubus, you gave her a humanity that didn't seem tacked on. Not to mention, Bastion towards the end of this post. A character who we genuinely see as a total badass and the only one we think could take Mintaka, and show us a whole other side to him. This is brutal, and I am absolutely loving it!
Chris Lock
Yeah I've got a massive file where I write it all before sharing. The eventual plan is to turn the whole thing into a full novel.
Thomas Halpin
There were two scenes here that I had missed on twitter. Glad you're recording them someplace at least someplace else, hopefully you also archive them for editing later, in case you want to put them in a format for distribution