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Tara and Karl Chapter 4: Page 19
🕑 Added 2020-05-26 12:01:00 +0000 UTC
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Dollmistress
Janet: "Diplomatic im-Mana-ty!" Demon Queen: "It's just been REVOKED."
Harlock
LOL! I wondered if anyone would notice that it was a shoe shop they were in front of.
Dollmistress
Quick, someone check that background shoe shop for Karl :D
Asani
DQ showing today why she wears the crown.
Harlock
Thanks.
Dollmistress
A couple of typo/grammar corrections: "let" should be "let's", and "picks her up by her neck" is clunky, consider "picks her up by the neck" instead. Also not sure if it should be "The Demon Queen" instead of just "Demon Queen", in the narration box at the start.
Sean McDermott
Nah he was brand new, straight off a mannequin. If he got purchased then he won't be disposed of so fast. But he might still be in the store the shop borrows them from
Mike K
Meanwhile, Karl is in the discount bin at a Thrift store.....
Mike K
The beginning of the end.....
