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Early Access - Chapter 36, Page 2
🕑 Added 2023-09-27 23:00:01 +0000 UTCNew chapter, new outfit!π Another page is going up tomorrow~
EDIT: After this page went up on webtoon, I realized a lot of people are confused about what happened to the duel, so I edited this page and made Karta clear up the situation. I'm gonna edit the webtoon episode too, but I wanted to fix the issue here on patreon first.
Hope it's easier to understand now!β¨π
Comments
Madamka
Thank you both! Honestly, whenever any of you see anything that feels off, you are more than welcome to let me know in the comments, I would much rather edit mistakes per page here on patreon. Editing on webtoon is a lot more complicated haha π
Nevik
I'd +1 that. But this is really a small thing so I wouldn't beat yourself up about it (saw the webtoon notice). The story has been great.
Verth
Iβm happy to ask the hard questions if you need someone to! I proof for a few of my author friends. (It helps me become a better writer, too! So they benefit and I benefit : D ))
Nevik
Yeah no worries. I run into that problem all the time too. Without a reader it's hard to tell sometimes what's enough and what's too much info.
Madamka
Yeah, I originally thought it would be easy to follow, but it's always easier for the creator to follow, since I know the whole story. :D I'm glad the edit is better!π
Nevik
Yeah I figured she didn't actually duel right then. That likely wouldn't make sense anyway since she probably needs more training? She was just declaring that this eventual fight is no longer about a date, since (for the moment) the date is off. So she basically reissued the challenge. But this is a good edit.
Madamka
She has a bit of a puppy crush on River, so she's into girls. ^^
Madamka
Hahah, no, but Bailey had to clean it up herself cause Karta just went to her room straight away. (even though she could have made it disappear with a wave of her hand, but who could blame her.)
Jack Newbill
Is Suzy into girls? She's pretty and kind, and I wonder if having a pretty, quirky girlfriend would do her a lot of good.
Rayj4ck
Did the giant head stay? I really wanna see the general reaction to the giant head. Ok it probably didn't stay, but that would've been hilarious if it had.
