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[Hereafter] Chapter CCV: Crossing the Mississippi
🕑 Added 2025-08-02 13:37:03 +0000 UTCInto the action we go!
I've gotta say, one of the things I was disappointed about most with this chapter and next chapter is how little I got to focus on the individual fights. Because Taylor is paying attention to each and I have to cover them as much in sequence and their simultaneity as I can, it made it hard to give them all the weight I could have if it was one, individual fight, even if it's a bunch of people all fighting one enemy (like with Herk and Caenis, the DGP, Altera, or Caligula, etc).
Also, those other Servants with Fionn aren't random dudes. Their identities will all get revealed within the next chapter, but even though they're OCs, they are in fact other Heroic Spirits from Celtic myth.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 9/13/2025
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Geoffrey Sullivan
You may not be happy with it - and I understand that *perfectly - * but for me, this chapter *did not* disappoint. It's one *hell* of an opening salvo, and I look forward *eagerly* to the ESCALATION . . .! :D Thank you, as always! :)
