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Chapter 27

🕑 Added 2023-02-09 05:17:29 +0000 UTC

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SilverbladeTE

Goblins...yeah, minion guards to warn of infiltrators is a good call, and maybe add some wood or metal to the hunting blinds to protect allies from goblin snipers! the little buggers make "nuke the site from orbit" a valid tactical choice, lol :P

Andrew Kluttz

That's a good suggestion. I'll keep that in mind for future chapters. I'm glad you're liking the story. I'm happy with how it's going right now, and I'm enjoying the pace overall. Some pretty fun and cool moments are coming soon.

Ethan Barrow

Loved the chapter, combats going very nice still. If I had one note to make it was a very short bit of confusion in the beginning of the chapter when Drew had responded to his wife offering assistance. My thought would be to add a single line of text to remind the reader of that offer from the end of the previous chapter. But to reiterate I think the story is going amazing!! I look forward to more.


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