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Chapter 31 -> Finish
🕑 Added 2024-06-17 22:08:13 +0000 UTCComments
Mr Adam McMurchie
Omg bro I just read this..wow thank you man. That means a lot. And it inspired me to make the game!
Darkblade
Holy shit didnt even took me two days to read all 40 chapters, i cant even say how amazing the whole book was, i somehow want to forget about it and read it all over again, that was just amazing
Mr Adam McMurchie
Oh dude, thank you so much - that really means a lot to me; when i finish the game, i want to go back and publish the book for sure! Any bit in particular you really liked?
Speedy777959
Just had to drop my two cents on this even though it’s not usually my thing. It’s been quite a long time since I’ve gotten this invested in a story (I started reading at 3am one night and became so fixated on it that I was up until 12:43 the next day just to finish it lol, ADHD is a hell of a drug!) and just had to say it was fantastic start to finish! Great characters, setting, world building, etc etc. I would love a game based off this as well even if it was purely a visual novel. Anywho just had to praise this for getting me hooked on a story. 10/10 would read again!
Mr Adam McMurchie
Great question, she's ended up becoming Tif!
Wyatt lute
Was Natasha ment to be where Kira was? Just wondering TBH
Mr Adam McMurchie
Hahaha love the idea man - might be something to consider when smashing Morrigan. btw, in this game the characters aren't as ferral as virra but I am strongly considering doing a game based on the book once this one is shipped. Hah, i'm glad you liked the end intimacy scenes - did it work out ok? Now for the scary question... What would you rate it out of 10?
Imsolo
Damn. What a finish to the story. That was a good read to say the least. Reading the courting part makes me think that for the game the MC might need to have some form of pre contact military enhancement(I'm thinking of calling it Project TITAN)that was on the cusp of being rolled out to high value units when the Kryl attack came and wiped out the program so only maybe a dozen people received it before most of the project data was lost. The point being is that TITAN serum would at least double the strength and speed of the MC so I don't get mauled to death trying to sleep my way to victory ;)
Mr Adam McMurchie
LOVED IT! (It was originally a UK production i think)
Greynightsaber
Where you a Dark Crystal fan?
Mr Adam McMurchie
I could put her in a scene and see how people feel once i make a video of it?
Greynightsaber
But your right 😔, the art doesn’t match the style.
Greynightsaber
Her face is gorgeous though 👀 love that color red.
