Xyphles
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First Draft done but alot more work ahead lol
🕑 Added 2025-06-23 18:14:18 +0000 UTCJust finished the first draft at around 14 and a half pages! but i am once again realizing the scope of the video is going to be expanded, classic youtuber moment lmao. On rereading theres moments i left out that i think would be very interesting to add to the narrative, things i want to put more focus and attention on letting moments linger etc etc. Classic first draft stuff missing. Honestly i think im going to do 2 more drafts at this point. This narrative spans across 3 years and i kinda underestimated how long properly conveying all of it would take, even without focusing on the world record improvement aspect that was also going on at the time. At some point in the future i really do want to go over that but if i end up adding that i now know this video would be like multiple hours and take like months to produce properly if i could manage to at all really lmfao. After a few more videos under my belt maybe.
I dont really want to take the time to type out the first draft and share it because its not really in a great state right now, it has its moments but alot of it is fairly rushed and probably wouldnt be a great read anyways. I will however commit to typing out the second draft once finished to get some feedback and give yall something for supporting over here other than more "hey guys i got more pages done but you cant see them!" posts lol. I know i said it last time but i feel like this is going to be yet another step up from the last video. Far from a magnum opus but i think ill really get to flex as a story teller and editor if i give this the time it needs and get it right.
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Xyphles
glad to hear it! and nah it doesnt feel like that at all brother i really enjoy hearing the feedback its helped a good amount so far especially with the thumbnail!
Yoinkeroon
I do love the "I got x done" updates, it shows me the speed it takes to be a solid creator while keeping me invested! I hope me giving feedback helps, I know it can feel like someone else just telling you what to do but that's not my intention at all
