Xyphles
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More Progress (i still dont know how to title these lol)
🕑 Added 2025-06-23 00:22:11 +0000 UTCYo, tha timeline of events is fully finished and im up to 10 pages in the rough draft. Just one more major event to write about after i wrap up the sugar free temple skip segement. The writing has felt noticeably less bad as ive gone on so i think im getting in the groove of this video now which hopefully means the next draft will come together nicely. Also worked on the thumbnail some more and think it looks pretty much done now. Lmk if yall got any more ideas, to me it looks good enough for final but might find something to tweak when i look at it again in a week or whatever lol.
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Xyphles
Thanks! And yeah for sure gonna go through again before writing the second draft, already have a few notes on the margins for stuff i noticed while writing. Its been a bit weird getting used to drafting again cause i havent for a good while (at least this intentionally) most of the time i would do it indirectly by coming up with an idea, working on it then forgetting about it for a while lmao. Appreciate the help 🫡
Yoinkeroon
BEAUTIFUL THUMNNAIL! Honestly looks like a final product to me. Also, once you've finished up more of your script I'd recommend going back from the start again so you have a chance to freshen it up with how you know everything else is/catch some small details that you wanna keep. Keep up the good work!
