Xyphles
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More pages? Yeah you guessed it lol
🕑 Added 2025-06-25 01:06:38 +0000 UTCThis is pretty quickly expanding in scope more than i thought it would lmfao. My first draft covering everything was about 14 and a half pages, currently in this second i am a bit over 12 pages and i have covered a little less than half the timeline i have and nothing feels like filler in the slightest. I think its blossoming rather than bloating for sure. Though it is really funny that originally this one was supposed to be a bit of "break" from the long gunless video lol. The scope creep has been really strong with this one ever since i found the golden framing device of rickys post. I was also a bit overzealous about maybe not having to do a third draft, it is no where near as rough as the first but i can see a few cracks that do need to be filled in later. I think i will still probably end up fixing those digitally after typing it over on google docs rather than a whole extra written out draft. Super excited to finish this second draft and share it with yall soon. I think im hardcore cookin still.
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Xyphles
Heres hopin lol would be sick
Yoinkeroon
Keep it in the oven, king. This one could turn out to be a hit banger, and the long-form Jak videos are popping up like crazy on my feed right now too
