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Library Cleaning WIP 23

🕑 Added 2024-09-22 14:21:00 +0000 UTC
Library Cleaning WIP 23
Library Cleaning WIP 23
Library Cleaning WIP 23
Library Cleaning WIP 23
Library Cleaning WIP 23

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Sikru

Yeah, I agree, that cut is a bit too quick. The previous plan I had was to show Lily with both the mouse girls in her hands first, which would have felt like a more reasonable time frame for those things to happen. But I decided to just show her swallowing them instead, and at this point it would be hard to change so I'm probably just going to leave it.

NotHere03

I think the cut between her reaching for the mousegirl behind the book to the mice in her belly was a bit too fast or sudden, but was nice to see inside her stomach again. As for the second one she swallows, I remember there was one hiding in the bottom cabinet that hadn't been grabbed yet, (till now off screen.) And with how Lily swallows them right after the other, they may have both been in her mouth, with one dangling halfway in or held in her cheeks as behind the shelf 6th was swallowed. The last still of Lily resting on Kirie's lap with her full belly is cute. She looks so proud of her catgirl.


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