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XEN extra pages - WIP script
🕑 Added 2020-02-23 22:09:53 +0000 UTCTell me what you think please, just a general idea of a set of pages that will join the start of the comic to give just enough background to key characters
"this is a memory-> many years ago"
*Nova is becoming a great fighter
-Where is your brother?
-He said he was sick.
-he better shows up next time
Nova is walking and hear some laughs
She finds Bandi and some girl in the gardens
-Bandi weren't you sick?!
-Huh I felt better , you know how much I like these gardens!
- the gardens, sure...
-would you keep this you saw between us?
-how many times I have to lie and save your furry ass?
-when are you going to grow up?
-you can't skip training, we are the vetusto's children and we have to be skilled warriors and leaders
-you are already a skilled fighter? why I have to be too?
- you are the first born and next leader! that's why you wear that cape everywhere! I don't!
- Listen, Bandi, we both have to be ready! you know how much I've worked to be what everyone expect of me! you are my brother and the same is expected from you!
- I know...
--I have to go now, need to study for the academy exams... promise me you will try harder?
- I will sister, I promise.
What do you think? I don't want to add that many pages and just add enough to give a little more personality to the characters
this bit will come after the page where Nova and Coronel Cale wonders where is Bandi since he's late when they're receiving the distress signal
