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Derideal ep 8 - page 17 comparison
🕑 Added 2020-11-21 15:41:49 +0000 UTCOriginal versus remake version this was mostly fixing up contrasts and just adding some extra lines to give more detail to part of the drawings.
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not a super difficult page to fix, but it shows a little better what's my purpose with the retouching of the pages, I'm trying to improve the general contrasts of the pages,
I made everything a little too dark because I didn't knew much about how to use color better at the time, so in the reworked pages I'm making shades a little less dark and improving contrastes between characters and backgrounds in the panels.
In case I want to print this, it will be better, because in paper colors become less bright and opaque, so keeping everything with a better contrast might make it look better later.
idk, something to worry about in the future, at least working in these pages has been relatively fast, I've just had to modify 3 pages completely, and about 3 reworked paneles at some degree.
I'll try to upload more examples of the new versions later
