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The Void ep4 - Page 29
🕑 Added 2021-01-08 13:15:43 +0000 UTCSometimes I feel I could save some pages if I put more thought into the script, like finding ways to save time on purpose.
I always take an intuitive approach, this is how I imagine the scene in my head, like how I feel it should go... ends up making 2 pages for this "Susu is hearing Ryan" part.
now that I think about it I could have saved this whole page, and condensed it into a single panel which is panel 4 and somehow paste just that into the next page and everything would still make sense.
I would just miss Rusty wanting to climb the stairs and Susu begging Colt and Rusty, saying again she wants to find Ryan quick.
idk, I think I need to have more patience... story has a good flow I think, but I could save work if I start spending more time imagining a cut version from whatever I'm imagining xd
sorry for the long thought.
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Texts got fixed! ty @endless
