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Derideal 10-20
🕑 Added 2022-10-07 14:34:18 +0000 UTCthe original page I thought it was so bad... that I basically re-draw this entirely :c
and almost every page in this episode was so dark!
I also took the time to divide their environments by color, so the panels would be also easier to tell which side, Ivory is standing in a orange-lit hallway
Alpha's room is mostly dark and bluish with night light
Comments
Andrés Barra
Lies! They obviously wanted both to be together (?) 😅
Dakkota
Both versions look good, and it's cool to see a bit of insight to that! Though, I gotta say, they didn't technically GIVE her a partner lol
Memsys
I know right!
Kit Foxboy
Kind of a fine line between edgy, apathetic, and brooding, huh?
Kit Foxboy
I love her infatuation and his uncertainty in the face of it. It would be a rush of possibility to meet another of your kind when you've been alone for so long.
Andrés Barra
yeah, he feels more uninterested
Memsys
alpha comes across as more edgy in the original x3
Andrés Barra
yeah, that's the general idea heh, the old pages are so bad sometimes :c
EunosMiata
I like the change to partner. And also the new updated page does look better. Keep it up👍
