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Derideal episode 3 "Laura edit"
🕑 Added 2023-04-21 17:28:48 +0000 UTCTHIS EPISODE IS VERY DIFFERENT FROM THE ORIGINAL!!!
ok this took me a while! but I managed to cut certain parts of the story that just were "cool to me" but weren't exactly helping.
I guess I liked it, but I decided to get rid of the entire "nightmare" dream in this episode.
and I replaced everything with a longer Aden + Laura interaction, also giving some more info about Laura's past.
managed to cut the episode page numbers a lot too, and despite that... I feel this version of the episode is much more relevant now, and it goes better with the "COMPANIONS" title.
Changes:
- Improved colors and contrast.
- reduced number of pages.
- improved dialogs for more clarity on motives.
- replaced the ending of the episode with a new set of pages.
please, any text corrections let me know!
TEXT GOT SOME FIXES, THANKS @TWILIGHT!!
another text fix! thanks @madpostman!
Comments
Kit Foxboy
This is SO GOOD. Not only did it add some charming levity and bonding with a more youthful art style, but the never forget me page just brings everything together just so well.
TheNat'LaGuy
And you are right. It is.
Andrés Barra
I think that this version of the episode is better than the original because it feels happier for a while.
TheNat'LaGuy
That's it I'm going to genocide all the Consortium + everyone involved with it (Exception being Daniel) How can they ruin such a heart-warming moment like this That's your call to never trust humanity.
