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Loyal Path "concept" pages
🕑 Added 2023-07-26 16:03:41 +0000 UTCHey, it's been some time since I made these pages, and well, this project is officially dead since months now, so I decided to share these.
first off, let's be clear about this:
THIS STORY ISN'T MINE!!!
I had to attempt to translate some scripts into comic form (the scripts weren't meant for comic)
and I think the narrative makes too many "jumps" at the beginning, so I'm not sure if it was working either, I just did what I could to bring the text into comic form at the time.
but I didn't wanted to modify the story, given the fact the comic wasn't mine...
later on, I tried to adapt all the scripts into a better "comic-narrative" which was a lot of work.
My personal opinion now is this:
- I liked the characters in the story itself, even in the scripts I got they were fun.
- the world felt generic to me, as the setting. then again, I'm not interested in fantasy much.
- I think the story would have worked without all the fuss about holy weapons.
I'll try to translate the "scripts" I made based off the original story and comment a little further about that process, my mistakes and all that.
PS. I quickly translated these pages, I don't want to improve the translations.
Comments
Andrés Barra
I don't generally do. but this was talked for a while and well, payment was supposed to be something sure each month over time, so it was doable.
Kit Foxboy
It's so gorgeous! I didn't know you ever did full comic comms.
