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Loyal Path ep2 - script part 1
🕑 Added 2023-09-14 19:49:24 +0000 UTCHello, I bring to you the part 2 of the "Loyal path" comic concept story.
this part is more of less entirely mine, but based of the original concepts of "finding a sword, finding a crow friend , give jake a bow and fighting a dragon"
this little bit is:
-revealing the plot of the "sword" (which, idk, I couldn't find a better way at the time, because the whole deal of the weapons felt messy to me)
-make extra interactions between the characters, I wanted to develop a little Li and Jake relationship
-tell a little about Li backstory and what's he's supposed to be.
- introduce "petra" a character I planned to use in other episodes (also present in the original concept story)
this was a big attempt of me to compress a bunch of written script ideas, that were too long to make into a single comic... turns out I just managed to make 2 comics, that were kinda long too, but they cover what I would say was "act 1" of the loyal path comic...
anyway, I'll be translating these ones, for anyone who's interested to peek at my version of this story, and the interactions I ended up making for these characters.
