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🕑 Added 2023-12-22 15:51:20 +0000 UTCAlright I just wanna talk about two different things, one for each page.
as introduction, just saying that these two scenes were on my head for a long time, but I had no place to put them in the story... specially C.Wally one where he talks a little about the Consortium city and how he sees things.
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Aden fighting in a red background with lights, which ended up yellow... was also a scene on my head for a long time, to just show how dangerous Alpha is for normal rebel soldiers, nobody really expects him to be as resilient to getting shot, and Ivory and he can move super fast compared to most humans.... this scene was important because something inside his mind just awakened, and he can't stop thinking about what he saw, about Laura and what all of this means, also related to a deep guilt inside him, enough to constantly ask for forgiveness in his head.
also took the chance to make Alpha realize he's not the same as usual, the explosion was too much for him to regenerate and the black patches are also physical pain he has to experience "after" the fights and his body regenerate.
these black patches are inorganic tissue ,articificial polymers that imitate organic flesh and replace it reacting to chemical signals... they also manage to connect themselves to nerves and muscular fiber, so the person feels alright, but that part of them is just "patched" it's not theirs anymore.
Alpha regeneration makes the patches malfunction, and they just keep expanding inside him, cusing pain, becoming a tumor of sorts.
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I won't elaborate much here, I'll wait for next page... just saying that in the Consortium city exist order, it's clean and people have very defined roles. the rest of the world works a little similar, but nothing as intense as in the Consortium city, a city mostly dedicated to science and technology.
original C.WALLY said "a city full of scientist working towards the future"
but I thought it was better to imply how he feels about this controlled city, which ensure humanity survival, and also planetary stability after a big mess humanity did to the planet before the NEXO and the Consortium.
