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Public Inspection Draft
🕑 Added 2024-06-19 17:35:09 +0000 UTC-Dear Public Inspector, prisoner number 34224 is in front of you, he is serving a seventeen-year sentence as a result of a court sentence.
-Heis doing the chores, am I right?
-Not really, he is being trained to carry them out - acquires the necessary skills for further correction process.
-Isnโt he hot in this outfit? His uniform looks quite heavy. What is it made of? is this rubber? May I touch it?
-Of course! INMATE #34224, ATTENTION! PREPARE FOR INSPECTION! Now you can touch him. The prisoner is dressed and equipped in accordance with CDF rules and regulations. In addition to its restrictive and protective functions against chemicals and harmful substances, this uniform is corrective in nature. A prisoner's uniform is one of the main keys to the correction process at CDF. It determines the status of the prisoner for the guards, other inmates and himself, instilling in him modesty, accuracy and attention to details. At CDF we have very high standards that prisoners must adhere to at all times. This means that he must keep his umiform in absolutely perfect condition at all times. Of course, he is provided with everything necessary to effectively and safely perform his duties. For example protective apron or this thick rubber coat. Of course, such measures may bring some discomfort, but we don not see it as a major problem to talk about. CDF is not a luxury resort, inmates have to be ready to pay the price for their propoer correction. Anyway, the prisoner has no complaints about working conditions and undergoes regular medical examinations. So you have nothing to worry about.
-I have been holding my position as a public inspector for two years now, and I admit that I am a little surprised that we have not received a single complaint or petition from your institution. How long will he be busy with this work, may I talk to him later?
-The work schedule was approved by the management of the institution. The prisoner has sufficient rest breaks for reports every three hours. During this training period he will be performing this job for at least 6 days more. Unfortunately, we cannot interrupt his training course, but you may request official visit in next 7 months.
-Six days? Really?
-We believe that consistency and multiple repetitions can produce great results in the quality of inmate training.
-Tell me, why is he looking at one point? May I just ask him a couple of questions here?
-The prisoner has strict instructions on behavior both inside his cell and inside a special work block. He is not allowed to make eye contact, attract attention, or talk without permission. If you wish, the prisoner will make an extraordinary report to you in the prescribed form, after which he will begin his work again.
-I wanted to ask whether such a long prison term frightens him and whether he intends to appeal the sentence?
-In his case, this is the final verdict - his lawyer made a deal with the court, the condition of which was to serve the full term of imprisonment in our correctional institution. Now he can be sure that he will leave ะกDF completely reformed person. Of course, itโs too early to talk about this - he has at least sixteen and a half years of correction ahead of him, however, we will make every effort to reform the prisoner.
- Is his work somehow paid for?
- At this stage, no, because, in fact, this is training, not work. After the expiration of the term of imprisonment, by such work the prisoner will pay for his maintenance in the CDF and the costs of his uniform and equipment that the CDF incurred during the entire period of his detention.
Comments
Raoul
https://www.patreon.com/posts/96359952?utm_campaign=postshare_fan&utm_source=android seems to be a great environment for this
Garry Nivel
Thank you, I will correct it.
Raoul
Last update contains a small inconsistency: they have already interupted him. Obviously he already stands at attention, looking at one point. And as you always say: it is his matter to deal with interruptions. ๐
Garry Nivel
Thank you. I really enjoy this scene. If you add something - I will be happy.
Raoul
Great. The more you write the more perfect it is๐ฏ๐ฅ๐
Raoul
Yes, great! ๐
Garry Nivel
Inspector will make excuses, but the guard will tell her that it is sole Inmateโs responsibility to look after his uniform. So, he will be pubished for this incindent.
Raoul
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Garry Nivel
This will be a big nuisance for the prisoner. With a careless touch from the inspector, his hat will fall to the floor, the whistle will immediately sound and the command follow "Attention, inmate 34224 bring yourself into proper shape, report!" He will immediately lift his cap, place it on his head, center it along his forehead, and begin to adjust himself according to the procedure. All buttons, apron fasteners, belt, smooth out coat wrinkles and straighten sleeves. After which he will stand at attention and report.
Raoul
And if inmate loses his hat due to touching it could lead to talks about headshave...
Raoul
I mean, perhaps she wipes/ cleans her fingers on inmates chest or arms
Raoul
Or hat is falling down...
Garry Nivel
100%. Of course, she doesn't care about it....
Raoul
Doing so she will get wet fingers or marks on her gloves. This could cause trouble...
Garry Nivel
Yes, I imagine she is touching his collar and edge of his hat, so he has to correct everything after that.
Raoul
Isnโt he hot in this outfit? His uniform looks quite heavy. What is it made of? is this rubber? May I touch it?... Like this...
Garry Nivel
Could you please define? I like the idea that stranger is allowed to touch inmate in any way she wants and inmate must stay without movement.
Raoul
I thought that I've already posted a thought about touching the inmate when it comes to his uniform...
Raoul
Yes, exactly...
Garry Nivel
I am sure, it should be. Inmate must present himself, his current number, also his basic number, his term, time served, expecteded date of release, his willingness for correction, also confirm that he doesnโt have any complaints.
Raoul
Is there a specific report for external inspection?
Raoul
I would change the last new paragraph into a more passive manner. His lawyer made the agreement until full correction. The deal contained forced compensation labour at the end of detention, which is now lower than the original threat of 25 years
Raoul
Same is true after degrading. Inmate will be a MaxSec 2. Class
Garry Nivel
Thank you! Your ideas really inspire me. Inmate must feel that despite promotion, he is not trusted, so he must be under special control and supervision.
Raoul
If I may, I will say: I love you, my friend ๐ฅโค๏ธ๐
Raoul
Although some relieved conditions, a very dangerous life
Garry Nivel
I think uniform may be colored half as MedSec and half as MaxSec
Raoul
Being promoted to MedSec means obviously special marking and special supervision
Raoul
Inmate may wear MedSec uniform and live in MedSec cell. Any bad conduct will result in degrading to MaxSec for another 20 years with engraved work training conditions
Garry Nivel
So, what happen after promotion from MaxSec to MedSec?
Garry Nivel
I really like it. Thank you!
Raoul
Yes, could match. LowSec Minimum Sentence with last 2 years of perfect conduct before a probation of 5 years, MedSec Minimum Sentence with last 5 years of perfect conduct before probation of 10 years, MaxSec Minimum Sentence with 10 years of perfect conduct before promotion to MedSec
Garry Nivel
For last 5 years?
Raoul
Which means, no punishment time since how long?
Garry Nivel
Sure. "Minimum 17 years till full correction"
Raoul
And I love the phrasing of training or trying to do the work
Raoul
Very nice. Please let's consider that court said "Minimum 17 years"...
