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After The Dragons Danced (A Rhaena Targaryen SI) -- 12. The Looting of Lys

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 09:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Sgt. Tibs

I thought that might be Rhaena too and i'll admit I was getting worked up about it. If Rhaena actually did that...omfg i'd be pissed. Would have been the most unnecessary thing ever lol.

StormyAngel

In this case, the size of the city doesn't matter so much, as the size of the group of people involved. The rich and powerful are a lot fewer in number, and these people pay attention to each other. Maybe the Bazanne's hiding out would make it take a bit longer for their bodies to be discovered (really depends on how visibly their heads were on those spikes), but the second they were found, word would have spread like wildfire among said rich and powerful. From there, it's theoretically possible for an individual to still miss it...but not if they're the kind of person who's actively trying to maintain power and influence over the whole city. In a position like that, you need to be watching *everyone* and a topic as widespread as this would be very noticeable. And given that it's literally been a month at least since the killings, it's insane to think the bodies haven't been discovered yet. A day or two maybe. Not multiple weeks. So under the circumstances, Lysandro comes across to me as a really big fool who's deluded himself into thinking he has more influence than he actually does. That the rest of the leaders of the city then go on to treat him like he *does* have as much influence as he thinks he does contradicts that though. One of these two things doesn't really agree with the other.

Neyra

You may have a point. My original reasoning was 1. Lys as a city is huge, 2. The Bazanne's were hunkering down/isolating themselves due to their massive debts and because they had Viserys and 3. Their state of being near the bottom of Lyseni powerful families would further make them invincible.

StormyAngel

Yeah, it's probably just me seeing things with that whole thing about Serenei. I doubt it will be something anyone else does. As to the Bazanne house: it's one thing to be unaware of their business behind closed doors, and entirely another thing to not hear about the family whose estate was plundered, whose slaves escaped, and whose heads got put on spikes. That kind of thing is going to be big news no matter who it happens to. Like, if a part of the city goes up in flames one night, everyone is going to notice that, regardless of which kind of buildings they are. It's sort of the same here. The city guard and citizens of Lys should be astonished by an estate/family being wiped out like that overnight without them catching the culprits. The major families should all be concerned about their own security. If someone in the city didn't hear about it by two days afterwards, they must live under a rock.

Neyra

That's how the Lyseni roll. They breed slaves to be their concubines. I'm glad you liked it. Among the power players, House Bazanne is at or near the bottom of the list. They are not part of the conclave as we can see, and thus their affairs are not important news to the real power players, hence why it takes quite a bit of time for the news to reach Lysandro. This is how I've squared it in my head, since, in canon, it took a year and a half for the news of the Bazanne family holding Viserys to reach Lysandro. And it didn't so much as reach him, as he stumbled upon it due to Bambarro's debts issues; the Bazanne's were sold into slavery to repay a debt they had defaulted on. That is deffo one way to perceive things, and I'll leave it that way to see if there's other people who see the way you do. But, at the end of the day, Rhaena would not do spy work herself. She may set up an intelligence institution, but she'd oversee it, not be a part of it herself. Also, in chapter 2, Rhaena is described to be more voluptuous/curvy by Baela (she underwent quite a bit of a growth spurt while in the Vale), and Serenei's looks don't match Rhaena's description there. She knows of the Lohars, but not how they look specifically. He especially wouldn't know Serenei since she's the youngest daughter out of quite a large bunch of children. And mayhaps he may recognise her a bit, hence her being quite striking in appearance to Lysandro. But, he perceives her to be just another of the Black Swann's bedwarmers. Stay tuned for more of Serenei as the chapters continue. She'll have a role in the story to come, you can be sure. Go look at chapter 14, which I have just posted.

StormyAngel

A chapter all about the city of Lys, so naturally there’s more fornication than the rest of the fic combined (so far). Heh. Overall I think this gave us pretty decent insight into the state of affairs in Lys, and I do enjoy the occasional antagonist perspective to give us the front row seats of their defeat. One nitpick: It did seem odd to me that it has been over a moon since the Bazanne family has been slain and their heads spiked to their fence, but the head of the Rogare family has somehow not been notified or otherwise discovered this. Despite him thinking he's basically king of the city. He’s either crazy out of touch or you mistook the timing? And something you might find amusing perhaps:
 Serenei was a bit confusing to me honestly. A Valyrian girl, approximately 16, with strong enough dragonblood not to mind hot baths, who is brand new to the manor…I half thought you were leading up to her pulling out a knife and being Rhaena all along somehow having snuck in to take him hostage or something. I was feeling fairly confident she wasn’t when you had him fuck her…but I was still left wondering because of how much focus she got. Then you have her draped in a black Targaryen cloak and Baela pays personal attention to her as if she knows her and the chapter ends with her killing Lysandro, and I was left wondering which of my assumptions was correct. I have no idea if anyone else will fall into the same mind-trap I did. The next chapter gives plenty of context to show that she definitely wasn’t Rhaena, but I wanted to point out the potential for ambiguity for your consideration. Edit: Oh, I just did a spot of re-reading and I spotted Serenei in an earlier chapter. I must say, that Lysandro doesn't recognize the name of the daughter of his former fleet admiral who famously fell into slavery due to Myrish assassins makes me feel even more that he's out of touch. This guy hardly knows anything about stuff going on around him.

Neyra

Hmmm.... I see what you mean I had it as AC mainly for the reader's context, since we mainly use AC.

Archivist

Minor nitpick - the Essosi probably count their years After the Doom, not After the Conquest.

Neyra

Thank you so much. I hope to explore and maximize that potential.

KAZUHA02

I'm binging through the chapters. Your story is so good and has so much potential

Neyra

Thank you so much ksri. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. There's more to come.

ksri

Amazing story!


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