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After The Dragons Danced (A Rhaena Targaryen SI) -- 13. The Trials of Tyrosh

🕑 Added 2024-11-14 09:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Peter

I believe the targaryens got dark sister back when years later Aemond’s dead body washed ashore and the sword was stuck in his eye

StormyAngel

So, I'm not a crossbow expert, but I fully believe that thing she's using in the video was a prop and not really properly cocked at any point. Likely for safety reasons for the film crew and actors etc. I mean, in the one shot we see on screen the rope behind the bolt barely moved. I got my estimate by just googling "How fast can you reload a crossbow". Here's a link to one of the sites that gives an estimate of 15-20 seconds reload (https://thebodytraining.com/how-fast-can-you-reload-a-crossbow/). Most of the websites I saw agreed with this estimate or thought it was too fast even.

Neyra

Yeah. Tyrosh took more than they thought they would. They didn't have time to plan as well as they could, but the still had to move as quickly as possible to ensure that Tyrosh is theirs before the Triarchy and the disputed lands devolve into war. I was going off this scene in House of the Dragon of how crossbows work: https://youtu.be/6m30gpQu_dI?si=R4N5CGTvGZrmJHwD. Is this an inaccurate representation of them? If it is, please tell me and I'll rewrite that bit. There's more coming.

Neyra

Maybe the dredged the lake. I'll have to do some research concerning this to be sure, since I'll most likely have to describe how it'll be done. Sadly, they didn't have bodies to have a proper funeral for. We shall see how things go concerning finding Darks Sister.

StormyAngel

One thing I’m really enjoying about this fic is that you move things along at a good pace. Here we have Tyrosh conquered, but giving them trouble, and you give us a feel for what their days look like and also their plans. It makes sense that they’d run into road bumps they didn’t expect or know to anticipate. For all Rhaena’s wisdom and their ambitions and planning, they all still have plenty to learn. On the job training for our up and coming conquerors. I am definitely curious who these assassins are. One thing I want to note is that it feels kind of impossible that Rhaena can reload a crossbow that quickly. Crossbows are notoriously difficult to reload, with an average of 60 seconds, and a high speed of 15 - 20 seconds. Here you have Rhaena doing it in 3-5 seconds twice rapidly, like it’s a bow or something.
 A simple solution: they both (Rhaena and Baela) have crossbows under their bed (At Baela’s insistence?). Have Rhaena hand one to Viserys. She fires the first, Visery fires the second, then Rhaena fires the first one again which she reloaded while he was firing. Still pretty fast reloading, but a lot less impossible seeming. And at last I have caught up. I am really loving this fic, as I'm sure you can tell. Sorry for the distraction during your exam season. I'll be less of a pest going forwards probably. XD

Zenokya

Kind of curious but I always wondered how they took back Dark Sister from the bottom of the God’s eye. Kind of sad also that Daemon never had a proper Targaryen funeral, might give some closure for the whole family. Same funeral urns as Rhaenyra, twin flame.

Neyra

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like this story. This is my first outing as an author, and it means a lot to me to know there's people who like it. Aah, I shall get to the Daemon SI once this story is done, you can be sure of that. Currently putting down all the ideas I'm get for it, and the plot is now beginning to take shape. In this case, no, but we shall get to the Faceless men soon enough. Stay tuned to see who sent these assassins. No, they did not. They've put those eggs in "stasis" deep within the Dragonmont, close to the magma, where it'll make sure that they'll remain viable but not hatch. They'll also be unreachable to Cannibal. They plan to hatch them in the cradles of their children they way Jaehaerys and Alysanne hatched Vermithor and Silverwing, since having them hatch before is quite tricky due to there being no dragonpit to keep them chained (reconstructing it will take a number of years), and the Cannibal still being active on Dragonstone. Stay tuned for all of this.

Zenokya

Incredible chapter and story! Love the chapter you did for a Daemon SI will support 100% Wonder if it is Braavos that hired the assassins ? Did they hatch the eggs on Dragonstone ?

Neyra

Posting about that on the Discord.

avatarjedi

Hey! Saw an updated on SB and was wondering if there was an update schedule for here as well?

Neyra

Working on that chapter. I'm glad you like it. Lol, he came out of there fast, didn't even bother to think

Neyra

Yes. I meant saviors. My fingers got confused as I typed lol.

Neyra

I'm really glad you like it. There's more coming to be sure, once my exam season comes to an end lolz.

avatarjedi

Great new chapter!

avatarjedi

You mean liberators?

Neyra

He gets the glory via osmosis, lol. To the eyes of the slaves, the Targaryens are their saviors, that includes Viserys.

Omar

Why are people calling Viserys, the Valiant? Kind of seems like an Unearned title. Since his sisters did most of the heavy lifting when it comes to freeing the slaves. While Viserys (who is still a child) just sat on the sidelines. Other than that, can’t wait for the next chapter!

Neyra

Thank you😌 Stay tuned

KAZUHA02

Looking forward for future chapters. Your story is enjoyable

Diego

Great chapter , poor Viserys is traumatized and naked lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.


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