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After the Dragons Danced (A Rhaena Targaryen SI) -- 14. The Kraken King

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 02:44:18 +0000 UTC

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Neyra

Well, they have to return to Westeros first.

Luxanna Aeterna

Well, except Seaguard, why should twins see this reaving as anything but beneficial humbling of their enemies and an invitation to end reaving once and for all?

Neyra

Comments are always welcome. Marriages are normally cemented when the bride and the groom consummate it. Right now, Aegon is 11 (turning 12 near the end of the year), and Jaehaera is 8 going on 9. They have 7 years before Jaehaera comes of age, so there's plenty of time for things to shift. Cregan did not fulfil his end of the Pact. Why should the Targaryens follow through with their part?

Zenokya

Still commenting sorry about that but I love this fic and those like it. I wonder how Jaehaera will be set aside without rekindling the war, maybe it is this for Peake performance. Also will be happy when pact of ice and fire is fulfilled.

Zenokya

Hope he is doing better, a healthy and somehow happy Aegon would be awesome. If he is to marry Baela she is going to put him back on track. Also will be very poetic in a sense, line of Aemon and Baelon finally reunited.

Neyra

Chapter 17 will be his next POV.

Zenokya

Are we going to have some news of Aegon soon ?

Neyra

The cliffhanger will not hang for long. Stay tuned to see what's going on with our twins.

Zenokya

Edit to my own comment: It would be evil/genius that Baela and Rhaena act against the Ironborn after they attack Oldtown. Will both be satisfying and beneficial. The whole Reach and Westerland will suffer, revenge against most of the traitor (half the reach was traitor in my eyes and Tyrell were useless). Beneficial because will put back the fear of the dragon back in the mind of the nobility, the Dance kind of gave the nobility the sense they could go against them, remind them they should not. Will also show to the smallfolk that Dragon are here to defend them, Faith might want to move to Kings landing since Hightowers can’t protect them.

Zenokya

First, a bit disappointed that we got a chapter on the ironborn as preparation for something when we had a cliffhanger last chapter. Second, since it has been 2 months (in fic) since the attack we can believe that the princesses have return to the Red Keep. Third, I don’t remember if the Ironborn have faced a dragon or encountered the aftermath of a dragon attack so it can easy to imagine that one dragon passing over their islands will not stop them. Big mistake and I believe that the attack on Lannisport is the perfect excuse for Baela/Rhaena to scorch the ironborn fleet AND island to the ground (bonus point if Dalton is kept alive to witness the death of his people). Fourth, It’s 100% sure that the Martells would attack after the Dance. This time Sunspear will burn I hope, might as well burn the whole kingdom. Will wait the next chapter with eagerness, continue the good work 😊

Neyra

I get it. It seems the reception on this chapter will be a bit more lukewarm than the dragon action and assassinations that were present before this. We have to set up the different factions and the different antagonists that were active during this era. We go to Sunspear next, I hope I do the Martell's justice.

Neyra

I get what you mean, and I really appreciate your patience in waiting for this chapter, but the plan is the plan. Hopefully as things go along, you'll be alright with how I paced this things. It might be the long wait between chapters that has soured you on how the fic as at now. I have to set up the different factions/antagonists that were active during this era of unrest after the Dance of the Dragons. We will get back to Tyrosh and the twins soon, you can trust that, and when we do, please comment again and tell me whether the pacing makes sense or your ill-feelings on the story remain. As long as I am alive, not indisposed, and I have the means to type and post, this story will continue.

StormyAngel

So, I have to admit, I didn't enjoy this chapter. It's no fault of your own: I literally just loathe the Greyjoys. In all of Westeros and all of its fanfiction, no one embodies the misery-porn that Martin sometimes indulges in better than the Greyjoys gone-a-reaving. >.> And you captured them perfectly. I'll never enjoy these kinds of chapters, but that's mostly a me thing. I am looking forward to the day this guy gets his comeuppance. Hopefully the Targaryens have a plan to save all the thralls when they bring fire and blood down on their heads. It's kind of a shame they're too busy to do so already. The next chapter I am definitely looking forward to. I do enjoy seeing the Dornish perspective, and it will be good to get an idea of how things are looking down south.

ThatGuy

So we left Tyrosh with an assassination attempt, questions, and now two months later we get Dalton Greyjoy interlude, followed by a Aliandre Martel? I skipped to notes at bottom of chapter btw(Tried to read, failed to care), and feel like I would be happier with a message you were dropping the story. And this is the second message, my first was... Vitriolic. Undoubtedly not what you want to read. You did, however, leave us off in wondering BEFORE THANKSGIVING. Switching to interludes of characters the twins are not going to hear or interact with for who knows how long is not the way to come back and expect universal approval from readers.

Neyra

lol.. It's a good enough reason not to, you can be sure.

Zenokya

Was about to go to sleep, guess not.


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