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After the Dragons Danced (A Rhaena Targaryen SI) -- 16. Factions

🕑 Added 2025-02-09 02:34:13 +0000 UTC

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Neyra

There'll be more concerning Dorne next chapter.

Neyra

Fuck, to be honest, I completely forgot about him while making my outlines. Hmm... we shall see. For now, let's assume that he was bought from Meereen specifically for Larra Rogare after he was married to Viserys II, so the answer is no. Although, I retain full authority to change that if I so wish.

BEMA45

I was wondering now that they have sacked Lys and ended the Rogare's, will Sandoq the Shadow appear? I think he would be a mayor boon to the twins and their safety, considering he was among the best warriors of that time

StormyAngel

Yeah, to be clear while I think Rhaena was wrong, I don't think it was out of character for her to take that stance. It wasn't an irrational position to hold. I look forward to seeing things develop from here.

Neyra

I have been waiting for your comment. Glad it came. Rhaena's reasoning for telling Baela not to outright burn Dorne is twofold. 1. He doesn't want to fight wars on multiple fronts. Going offensive on the Dornish would all but ensure that. 2. She's afraid. Yes, the crossbow shot that caught Meraxes in the eye was a one in a million shot, but it still hit, and Meraxes and her rider still died. Tactically, Baela at this point is the tip of the spear to her plans because she's currently the only battle-ready dragonrider. In her head, it's better to preserve her as much as she could. And she's also her sister and she loves her. Dorne was not quiet in this time, even in canon. Aliandra married Drazenko Rogare and together with Lys, they conquered the Stepstones. She also urged her vassals to attack the Seven Kingdoms. It's just that, in canon, the Targaryens were way less powerful than they were now. We shall see what will happen with Dorne in the coming chapters and as the story progresses.\

StormyAngel

A very good chapter! I like that Rhaena and Baela let Viserys serve as tie-breaker here. He's got good instincts, so it serves them well. Especially with how correct he was here. The number one mistake people make sometimes is pretending that they aren't at war, even as their enemies take every action they can to prosecute one. Daemon's brother Viserys made the same mistake with the Triarchy, etc. It's a nice delusion to pretend that things are peaceful if you don't fight back, but it just gets people killed. I can understand Rhaena's reluctance if she thinks this will cause escalation, but in this case she's definitely miscalculating the dornish will to attack them unprovoked. (Which to be fair, in the canon timeline they were pretty quiet in this period, I think.) I don't know if Dorne will actually step back just from this, but at the very least Aliandra's power and reputation with her people will have taken a hit. It's a good opening salvo for the Targaryens. They may have to wait a while to really fulfill Baela's promised threat but the Dornish will be fools if they think she won't after this.

Neyra

That's deffo going to happen. What do they say, when the dragon's away, the mice will play. With the wealth collected from Myr, Lys and Tyrosh, the Targaryens are about Lannister rich at this point.

Robert Thompson

Awesome chapter. Please Have Baela and Rhaena put all the people in their place when they get back. You should also have them make the Hightowers pay the targs so they have more money

Neyra

I'm currently outlining that chapter. It's going to be there. But, honestly, trying to write in a depressed eleven-year-old's voice after coming from the badassery that was this chapter is proving to be challenging.

Emi

Aliandra is probably going to be seen as a really weak ruler by her supporters now after all the boasting she did. Wonder how that will play out. I'm glad we are going back to king's landing next chapter. It will be funny to see the regency council's reaction to Baela just going in and burning Dorne without their approval. It sends a signal to all of the seven kingdoms who the real rulers are.

Neyra

I'm glad you like it. It will be. Yes...Tyrosh, the Stepstones and Harrenhal are direct Targaryen holdings. (Harrenhal has squatters living in them tho) Unwin Peake in canon got his office after Corlys' death. Right now, Corlys is very much alive. Aiming to not ruffle feathers might not be the best approach. See you soon. Lemme get started with pre-writing chapter 17.

Zenokya

Superb chapter, nicely done I love it! I believe that Tyrosh will always be an issue for a long time, it is easy to conquer but hard to keep. Tyrosh with stepstones along Harrenhal as future Targaryen holdings? Wonder if we will get Peake performance next chapter ? As for the Maesters, yeah for a group that say they are not political there is a lot of dirt beneath that ink. I’m sure they hate the Targs for their magic blood and dragons. Might be best to invest in loyal people to become maester without ruffling too much feathers with Faith/Citadel. Take care and see you next time 😊

Neyra

Stay tuned. Though, you may glean some clues.

BEMA45

Great chapter! Great to see Baela in action and Rhaena's first flight! And aboit the dragons, I've seen they have plan's to bring back Sheepstealer and hatch the eggs, but what is going to happen with Cannibal? Are they going to leave him be? And if so, is he not a danger for the future hatchling's?


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