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Chapter 188 War

🕑 Added 2019-04-05 10:07:32 +0000 UTC

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Straven

Glad to see least one of them soldiers wasn't a waste of air. Thank you for the chapter.

Call0013

I like this chapter Hopefully Ilea will stay like this and no longer Target people for simply being related to someone else anymore.

Baba Vader

That’s what happens when you put smartphone A.Is into murder machines. -- the "A.Is" gives a weird link, check the formatting, maybe just remove the dot.

Chymor

Great changes to the formatting, makes everything significantly easier to read. I find the italic and normal fonts to be about as easy to read, but it helps break up paragraphs without adding a lot of space. Before it was a bit of an issue if you went back and forth between descriptions and thoughts (or even worse dialogue) in a paragraph.

In my opinion for thoughts apostrophes are necessary, but if you want to change something, italics too can be fine as an addition, but not as a replacement.

Thanks for the Chapter I liked the other way of 'thoughts' better than italics. By using italics it's harder for me to differ thoughts from other text. This effect is even more present here on Patreon with it's font without serifs. I recommend using additional means of pointing out thoughts like added spacing, adding other symbols like > < or other similar means. Italics work well to point out some parts of a sentence to maybe make the reader think about a special meaning the words. I like the usage of bold letters for notifications. But i'm no author and don't want to exclude the possibility that i'm just not used to the new style. I still like your story :P Keep it up!

Corwin Amber

'already killed on guy' on->one


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