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🕑 Added 2019-05-03 19:34:11 +0000 UTCHey all. I do hope you are doing alright :). New chapters are up and I hope you like them. Let me know what you think, specifically on the dialogue. I didn't like some of it when I reread.
Next ones Friday in a week. Have a good weekend everybody!
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G. Harthane
Thanks for reading :)!
G. Harthane
I think the issue was mostly just all of the encounters being a little too big. She was just one part of a big battle or it was a team fight. With so many abilities going around, her impact feels lacking. Thanks for the feedback and let me know what you think in future chapters!
G. Harthane
Thank you for reading and the financial support :)!
G. Harthane
For me it fit. I just hope the shift isn't too unnatural and quick. I also don't want the next thousand pages to be her wallowing in self pity.
G. Harthane
Thank you, really appreciate the positive feedback :).
G. Harthane
Nah, that burnt up in the Taleen dungeon. I forgot about it at some point and didn't delete it from my item list so that's completely on me.
j0ntsa
hidden stat!
Baba Vader
Thanks for the chapters!
Benjamin
Nice seeing illia interacting with some other high level people. It's what I'm here for... And hopefully some monster mashing. Her last few fights against demons and humans feel disconnected and there's no weight to it. Looking forward to more adventures. :P
Corwin Amber
Thanks for the chapters
closeded
I liked the conversation with the cake; it's nice to see Ilea a little bit more light hearted again.
Matthias
ilea's charisma saves the day once more
Thaabit Rivertree
I thought the conversation between Ilea and Kyrian was well done actually
j0ntsa
Btw, does ilya still have that cloak of the night?
