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Chapter 203 Hunters and Prey

🕑 Added 2019-05-10 17:23:52 +0000 UTC

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Straven

Damn but many a person no doubt would hate to face her if they truly knew just what she could do. Thanks for the chapter.

G. Harthane

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback. Some people like it, some don't :).

Great chapters! I really enjoyed them this week

Chopper

Thanks for the chapters!

I really enjoy how the fight doesn't go the way it was planned. Random teleport. Unexpected kill by someone 'weak' not expected to be there. Subordinates showing up after the boss is already dead. These are the elements that make your writing stand out. Please keep them coming.

Arkeus

I liked those chapters and that fight. It felt really good that Arthur had his own defences and traps, that Ilea managed to greatly weaken his guards through briberies, and than Edward's own arrogance cost him not being to get the kill... but Felicia's own desire for revenge did.

Ato

it really was very anticlimatic, tbh all 3 of these chapters weren't as good as usual

carebear90

Is it on purpose that this whole arc feels kinda anticlimactic? So much build-up for an off screen kill? He was a double, right?

G. Harthane

I agree, still it felt right to me. Fights do happen very quickly and her escape had to be quick considering the dangers. Sorry if it took away from the reading experience!

G. Harthane

I like those suggestions, thanks :)

Tommy Littlefield

Also great chaps keep up the good work my dude

Tommy Littlefield

If you are looking for skill possibilities suggestions when she upgrades destruction skill to third tier I’d make its effect either A) combine the destruction mana and mana drain from its second tier together so she doesn’t have to choose only one Or B) make the destructive mana penetrate protective barriers

Corwin Amber

'as we took care of the intruders' should either be 'as we take' or 'as we have taken'

TheTiredOne

These chapters felt rushed, not quality wise, but in how events unfolded.

Tsaimath

Classy, headbutting the enemies armour until it breaks. Did anyone claim she was hardheaded and she felt a need to prove them right?


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