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Chapter 217 Preparation

🕑 Added 2019-06-09 15:49:50 +0000 UTC

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G. Harthane

Hmm, think you're right. I got some criticism regarding it being unclear who was talking so I guess I got used to mentioning it most of the time.

G. Harthane

Too much you think?

Håvard

'notice soon enough.” The hunter said. It was certainly tempting, to ask an' the tree word sentence is not needed to know who is speaking same with the Ilea finished at the end you have this great speech to end the chapter then those two wrods ruined it, sorry. If an reader dont know who is making that speach they have only read that paragraph of the story, so you don't have to state it.

Arkeus

*Arrogance intensifies*


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