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Chapter 78 Excursion

🕑 Added 2018-06-21 15:46:19 +0000 UTC

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G. Harthane

Perhaps not, perhaps it is meant to be...corrected though, thanks.

G. Harthane

Thanks, glad to hear that :)

G. Harthane

You're right, corrected the second one and changed the first to: Adam knew the man simply told him out of obligation to the guild, he likely didn’t care either way.

Nicco merritt

"An hour on food as advertised had been crossed in a mere minutes by her speed and ability to cross over any obstacles put in her way." food should be foot

Straven

Thank you for another chapter, can't say there was many issues barring small little misplaces with letters and a few errors. Aside from that it was good.

Arkeus

“We should stop this if nobody should get hurt.” he stated. Adam knew the man simply told him, he didn’t care either way. ‘I would usually stop this but it seems like they’re having fun...’ he thought and didn’t say or do anything to stop it. <= I think you mean "Adam knew the man was just saying this for procedure and didn't actually care to make them stop" or some such, but it appears a bit awkward? Both Adam and William had no problem following them but neither had the illusion of being able to match their mobility. ‘Not like this at least...’ Adam though. <= thought


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