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Chapter 86 Dinner

🕑 Added 2018-07-05 16:36:29 +0000 UTC

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Samuel McCabe

A sentence I'm not sure about: "rather watch you make food and eat it than do you."

G. Harthane

Thanks for the notice. I sometimes just write and realize that I'm well over the 3k mark. Trying to find a way to cut it apart can sometimes be difficult. I try to do it with a scene change though I fuck up sometimes :).

saganatsu

You're splitting a conversation between two chapters, and doing so in such a way that the second chapter starts in a way that makes no sense unless you double back and reread that last statement of the previous chapter. You might want to move the chapter break around to someplace that makes a bit more sense.

Straven

I see she's going to be well fixed in regards to food for awhile. Thanks for the chapter.

Arkeus

Considering it probably wasn’t a fighting class it seemed hard to level up such a class depending on the second class of course. <= probably should have a comma before depending. A bit disappointed that while both of them talked about how they got to level 200, Ilea didn't.


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