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Chapter 118 Mind Weaver

🕑 Added 2018-09-13 16:27:54 +0000 UTC

Comments

Erik Zorger

I agree with most of the others. Your fights are well done, but are starting to feel repetitive with the same skills being used all the time. (I did like how she was shown using her bow though.) I feel that the basic fight scenes can be reduced unless it is relivant to skill building. (Like when she held the monsters while getting hit by lightning to raise her resistance more) or even the scene where she has her through torn out was great and added to story because we could understand what she is capable of more.

G. Harthane

Yea, I felt like it was a little long as well but then again I'm not sure how it would be reading the last 20 chapters in one go. For now I'll leave it as is. Thanks for the feedback though.

Bobby B.

I rather like the back and forth between heavy combat and chill times

Zacle

thanks for the chapters and I agree with Daniel. the fighting in Edgar's Haven was good because it allowed us to understand the chaos that was erupting around Ilea most of the battles in this chapter didn't really seem to serve a purpose imo. I found myself skipping/skimming paragraphs of battles.

Baba Vader

Good thing we got that much downtime before this much fighting :o For down in Eregar's Haven it worked quite well to get an understanding of how chaotic the situation is, but this chapter's first half was a little bit much. Having them fight this much is fine, though do shorten some of it, make it less descriptive a little bit like fast forward. Might also fell like it due to the release schedule, getting weeks of relaxed character building and slice of life and then suddenly blood everywhere. Yes, we do always ask for action, but that doesn't mean we know what we want xD

Aapjuh

i can see some people liking it, i just skip it and scroll to the first skill dump or dialog.

Silver Beard

Enjoyed the battle, but seems directionless.


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