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Chapter 124 Into the Light

🕑 Added 2018-10-04 16:20:05 +0000 UTC

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Keifru

Well this fucking hurts my heart...what are you, Wildbow's apprentice? What did Kyrian and Cless do to deserve 'weeks-to-months of Ilea gone'? T_T

Alan McBrayer

It is a bit impulsive but even if it just works for her Trian wouldn't exactly be stranded given that he has access to a device that can teleport to any reality. Also by having her on the otherside aware of where he is she might be able to bridge the gap or even straight up summon him.

Deinos

Hmm the usage of the third stage of Blink, wouldn't it have been very much possible that she simply returned without anyone attached? How did she get the certainty that this will work or that the spell is even remotely compatible? Feels like a little happy-go-lucky with the very possible outcome that she leaves Trian to fend for himself. Neither as if they stayed there for months trying out to slow it down or other things with this being the final straw.

Deinos

Hmm I wonder why you think that. It's like the fable of the guy who went through a door in his house into a different space, where he found love and happiness, but it always gnawed on him if he could just go back this once to see what had become of his former home. When he finally decided to do so the door behind him disappeared. Lea doesn't want to lose all she gained even though she would like to see her family again, and as it is described they were not super close either.

Baba Vader

I feel left hanging a little with the explanation of why Ilea doesn't want to go back to earth. I hope that's intended and Cless (or others) will lead to an eventual return somewhere down the line. But with the way you have been going about your story, I trust you have a plan that will satisfy me as a reader, so keep going strong!


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