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🕑 Added 2018-12-14 21:29:10 +0000 UTC

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Baba Vader

Thanks for the chapters!

G. Harthane

I agree, I literally just did a scene that is a little like that but I could've focused on those things more. Thanks for the suggestions. The ash thing is similar to air bending the air out of enemies' lungs which doesn't work in this universe. Shooting it into their throats works I guess but seems a bit excessive. It's pocket sand though so I like it ^^

G. Harthane

Thank you :)

G. Harthane

Thank you. It didn't completely crash, which is nice.

Thaabit Rivertree

Sorry for not posting this when it was more relevant but I think there was a lot of comedic opportunity missed with weavy. When he got introduced to the woods for the first time, Kyra's food, they were pretty funny. It could have been an ongoing schtick where new or similar things kept making him go agog and act like a child who discovered something amazing. He would be great comedic relief. Also just a suggestion Ilea could rush Ash into her enemies throats to cause them to choke and cough, giving her an opening, or if for some reason she cant control it inside their bodies she could fire balls of ash at their mouths, assuming her aim is good enough. Kind of dirty but i dont think she'd mind. Food for thought, and thanks for the chapter. I'm enjoying the story and hope you have a better week