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Chapter 161 #Economics

🕑 Added 2019-01-11 11:39:45 +0000 UTC

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G. Harthane

Thanks!

Gardor

combined with the funds to rebuild left a lot of economical opportunities. --> economic

G. Harthane

Changed it to intricate design woven into it. Thank you :). Woven woven.

G. Harthane

Corrected, thanks!

Baba Vader

"an intricately woven design woven into it." Sounds bad because of double woven, maybe change it to "intricate design".

Scott

Rather, diamonds (compressed, or structured carbon). Maybe other gemstones depending on what elements are encompassed in "ash"

Straven

Thank you for the chapter.

Mr. Bigglesworth

Just compressing Ash is child's play! Wait till she learns that everything in the universe that's solid has a crystalline structure! ASH-CRYSTAL BULLETS GOOOOOOOO! Also, she need a new leveling spot TONS. Is there more land than just the Empire they are in? I can't remember if there was ever a big 'world' map shown.

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapters

Adurna

Last few paragraphs flow a bit oddly. Not as clear as usual. Good batch though! Have a great weekend!

j0ntsa

it was lying chair not chair chair.. at least i think so

Gardor

Becoming sort of, well thing--> sort of, well, a thing.

Gardor

Don't worry, they didn't below to anyone anymore--> belong. I think she already has a chair from when she raided a bookstore or something during an elf attack


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