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Chapter 317 The End of Patience

🕑 Added 2019-10-03 15:02:45 +0000 UTC

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Scott P

Yeah, the close timing bugged me a bit too, I like how struggling to open the doors and clear out the early areas accounts for some of it but it's still really tight, I'm pretty sure with the changes the entrance of Ilea and Elfie aren't quite as over the top last second rescue as before. There could have been something about the Feynor attack that either distracted Elfie or motivated them to feel ready. Maybe they used it as part of how they deceived him. We also don't know the exact range and utility of Sentinal Huntress's second ability for sensing distress, that could certainly justify her timing a bit more if she got a faint sense that something was happening. Could be a bit ridiculous too though if she can sense that far, of course it does mention being able to overcharge that skill too. "2nd stage: You gain a sense for the distress in the people around you. Amplify this by sacrificing mana." I guess we will have to see what Rhaegar has in mind for it. Really liked the new edits on this.

Yshua

Dialogue around the basilisk still needs clarification- it feels like sentences are missing, characters know things they shouldn’t from dialogue. Intent behind “young maybe” is unclear, etc.

Deinos

Love it, it's always nice to jump straight into the action, very cinematic.. but also quite unrealistic dat last action hero stunt. I'm wondering if there's anything to make it more believable that she appeared in the nick of time. A minute or five and they'd be paste, while Llea didn't really have a set date and time to come back.

Bobby B.

I FUKKIN KNEW ELFIE LOVED EM!!!!

Michael C

Yea. Wish she had shown up and found them already dead and only 1 big bad preen

Garbled Sounds

I'd like to see these three get brutally slaughtered

Chopper

Maro said 'it must have had young or perhaps you invaded its territory' the line before.

blub01

it was implied on a couple of occasions that elfie cares about the younger elves quite a bit more than he lets on.

Arkeus

“Well I’d like to see you fight after pushing out a baby.” Maro said, Ilea rolling her eyes at the comment. <= Ilea hadn't mentioned it just had a baby. Her Sentinel Huntress skill quickly picked up no the magical signs of the three. <= probably shouldb't be a 'no' there. They certainly had grown in the past year. <= I have always a hard time getting how much time has passed, but hasn't it only been a few months since she met them?

Yshua

This feels forced, my impression of Elfie so far does not support this behavior. Where did the attachment come from?


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