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Chapter 839 Riddles

🕑 Added 2022-04-07 12:00:00 +0000 UTC

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b51015

Riddles for the races, makes me think about the artifacts she found in Ker Velor’s trap: one for the Mava, one for the better half of the unity (Nes), one for those who know of the Azarinth (humans!, Edgar?, other remnants), one for/with an elf(s), one for the dwarfs (Talean key), only the dark ones are missing. Does he know something? Not likely, but would be fun if it was the case “mana given willingly” and all that. He did have that whole spiel about which artifact she was after. Do note that we can’t be sure how he knew she took all 5. Oh well, fun theory 😁

Gardor

Having everyone sound the same as they playfully banter was the problem I mentioned, I have nothing against the tones of scenes. A character can joke around without saying the same words in the same way, do you understand? It's like, the Meadow shouldn't make a joke about the Backstreet Boys, get it? The characters are different, and should have different opinions and perspectives and methods of expression. AKA, they should have their own unique voices. Also, how do you know how old I am? Have I been doxxed? I'll develop a personality one of these days.

Insanely Asian

So basically, no banter; just business? Personally I completely abhor overly serious literature, which is why I prefer litRPGs like AH and PH. Having characters engage in playful banter does not diminish their individuality, nor is playful banter in anyway a sign of immaturity. But hey maybe I'm just one of those sarcastic millennials you seem to be alluding to, it sure does suck to have no identifying personality traits at 32.

Gardor

You seem to be arguing that it's alright for all the characters to have the same voice, which is...bad advice. Make the exiled historian elf sound different from the whimsical kitsune. (They kind of were this chapter, those were just to the two characters that came to mind) Goliath sounded unique, characters being genuine usually come off alright, it's only once they all start snarking that they lose any identifying personality. Them all sounding like sarcastic millennials gets old, fast, and is not...good. Its not good, I don't really know how else to say it, and it's something to watch out for.

Insanely Asian

That's called character development, these are supposed to be Ilea's friend's. With Ilea being the common denominator here, it would make sense that their behavior would be influenced by hers. Believe it or not, most people tend to act differently amongst close personal acquaintances, rather than amongst those they have just met. Ilea is the playful affectionate type, so their mannerisms reflect that.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Zarik0

Good chapter Goliath seem a bit off in his lines and manner, guess he really have changed with the multiple interaction and contact he get with the Accord now for months and we didnt see it at all, not much a isolated hermit sage and gruff now, he have mellowned a lot and become quite a social buterfly :) having a lots of contact with people now and active part of a "society" :)

Matthias

I kinda really wanna know what these riddles are like also, I love how the Mava near instantly solved their part of it. I guess cake is the single greatest motivator for them at this point

It feels like whenever a character is introduced they have their own personality and mannerisms, but over time the author kinda forgets exactly how they are and defaults back to generic snark

Andrew

Thank you!

Gardor

All of her friends are hundreds of years old / omnipotent arborous gods, and she's a mid twenties kick boxer from a different universe. I feel like they should have distinct personalities

Leeland

Eh, people influence each other and each others mannerisms.

SpaceGoddess76

Or save it for chapter 850

Tequila Worm

Tyfc

Arcanum

Thanks for the chapter, hope she levels to 850 or beyond in these 4 days

The other DB

Thanks for the chapter!

Gardor

Careful not to have everyone become snarky clones of Ilea when they're talking, it gets a little more noticeable when you run through a whole cast of characters in one chapter, little bit "one note"

Areshan

YAY


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