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Chapter 907 Fissure

🕑 Added 2022-10-05 12:12:47 +0000 UTC

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Pierre Steiner

Oh my word now I really want to read that story

Michael Click

Love it!

yannick schwende

Great short story. Kudos to you my friend. ^^

Zarik0

Nice one :)

Glass Glade

Here’s a mini fanfic where I’m trying to emulate the style and feel of Sunflower by Razzmatazz. Contains spoilers for the above chapter. Also posted here: https://new.reddit.com/r/glassglade/comments/xy482n/azarinth_healer_spider/ __ I am spider. It is calm. My web is bright, a shimmering nest of delicate lines. It is perfect. Glorious. Light comes through the strange nothing I can touch. Beyond its barrier I can see the green of trees and grass. I see them move. Prey? I move to focus. No. It is wind. Tricky wind. There is no wind here. I remember the wind. It moved my web. Made it glitter in the light. But wind is not prey. My web traps my prey. It could not trap the wind. Wind is not prey. It is tricky. Tricky wind. I try to go to the trees, one leg stepping off my web. The strange nothing stops me again. It is okay. My web is here. I will wait. Wait on my web. Wait for the prey. Maybe the strange nothing will let me pass some day. But not today. My web shakes. Prey? My eyes see nothing. Tricky wind? My web shakes again. No, the wind flutters. This does not flutter my hair. Not wind. This vibration comes from the wood beyond my web. Far below. I scuttle to the dark corner of my web. Safe. The shakes still happen. But I am safe. Safe in my web. I am calm. In a flash my surroundings change. I do not feel my web. Where is my web? I do not see my web. I want my web. I try to move, but can not. Tricky wind? No, the wind moves. I can not move. I will wait. I will watch. I am calm. In front of me is the large one. Is it a spider? Where are all its legs? It must have lost its legs. How sad for large spider. Its hair is long, golden like the morning light. It is pretty. But it is not as pretty as my web. Where is its web? Can they not make a web? I miss my web. Where is my web? Today there is another large one. Smaller than the other large one. It also has missing legs. Such sadness for the large ones. To lose so many legs. Tragedy. Maybe they will feel better with a web. I can make a web. A web for the large ones. A third large one is behind me. I can see some of it. I want to turn to look. To look at this large one. To see if it has all its legs. Its hair is black. Shiny. But not as shiny as my web. But I can not move. So I will wait. Wait until I can move. Wait until I can find my web. I am calm. The large one in front of me looks at me closely. Its pedipalps are strange. Pink in color. No hair. Poor large one. First the legs. Now the pedipalps. I really should make a web for the large one. It must be sad with missing legs and strange pedipalps. Its pedipalps move rapidly. A dance? I do not know this dance. Curious. I watch. I watch until her pedipalp dance stops. I am calm. In a flash my surroundings change. The large ones are gone. Good bye, large ones. I hope you find a web. I am in my web. My safe web. My beautiful web. I am calm. But something shines in my eyes. Thoughts come with the light. ‘ding’ ‘Dragonslayer has bathed your body in Space Magic, changing it permanently. You grow more resilient, stronger, and more nimble +10 Vitality, +5 Endurance, +5 Strength, +5 Dexterity. The flow of your Mana has changed +10 Intelligence, +10 Wisdom. Your attunement to the Fabric grows closer. Space Magic improved by 100%.’ ‘ding’ ‘Space Magic Resistance increased to level 1.’ ‘ding’ ‘Fear Resistance increased to level 1.’ Name: Class 1: Space-Touched Noble False Widow – lvl 1 - Active: Web Production – lvl 1 - Active: Free Slot - Active: Free Slot - Passive: Web Sense – lvl 1 - Passive: Space Manipulation – lvl 1 - Passive: Free Slot General Skills: - Fear Resistance lvl 1 - Space Magic Resistance lvl 1 Status: Vitality: 11 Endurance: 6 Strength 6 Dexterity 8 Intelligence 10 Wisdom 10 Health: 110/110 Stamina: 60/60 Mana: 100/100 The thought-light fades before my eyes. It was pretty. But not as pretty as my web. It is also wrong. I am spider. ‘ding’ ‘Name changed to Spider.’ Yes, thought-light. I am spider. Without the thought-light in the way, I see another web. Not my web. It is everywhere. It is a pretty web. More pretty than my web. Blasphemous. I try to touch the other web. It is slippery, but I feel something leave me and I touch the web. It moves. It is very pretty. I wonder what spider spun this web? I will learn from their web. I will change my web. My web will be better than the other web. Maybe then I can catch the tricky wind? And then I will show the spider who spun this web my prettier web. My web that catches the tricky wind.

Indy

I actual dont know if you are sarcastic or not

fbt

ngl, I do wanna see more of this, but I *really* hope you take ur time and do it right (defined as ur happy w/ it). Or revisit it in edits before kindle, or whatev. A lot of the interactions have been shortened/glossed over pretty heavily, to the pt it seems almost like missing lines? u do u, and GL! Still a solid story.

fbt

Ilea the diplomat...walks out of the ongoing VIIP meeting to bang the waitstaff. Yeah, I can see it. :)

fbt

even if they did, there are prob other continents on Elos she's not yet found as the oceans are portrayed as impassible due to ubermobs (idk why now; she can go orbital and avoid the oceans entirely, and if space over Meadow's old home is survivable space over Elos should be trivial)

Steven C

Space magic is super rare even on Elos. Ilea had to befriend Violence in order to get it, and then to advance to the point where she could cross realms... no. Cless also got her travel from piggybacking on Ilea's Fae connection and was far, far, from realm travel on her own. There's no way another of the lost will make it back before the big changes hit. And why would Ilea want to lock in the political status quo by empowering governments? Yes, *some* of them keep their desire to control and seize everything in check (ever fewer as time goes on, it seems), but put becoming a literally immortal divinity on the table and all bets are off. More to the point, she's not interested in that stuff. Much more likely she keeps doing her usual and giving gifts to people she likes, while maybe having some Sentinels keep an eye out to make sure nothing really big and bad happens.

Devin Jones

Aw, yeah! The return of Ilea The Diplomat. As Earth and Elos converge, the Accords will naturally send their best negotiator to establish peaceful relationships with the various nation-states of Earth.

thkiw

and if she lets people from the varius goverments/shadow government/whatever lizard people, work on it by giving them space magic all they have to do is essentially their job. she won't ever need to do it herself. which saves her time, and the accords can work on integrating & developing varius tech and info from another world.

thkiw

the accords will work with the governments, not lilith. they will jump on the opportunity to join a secret organization from across worlds. and again, it's just to prepare them for what's to come. she's essentially doing THEM a favour. there's no reason not to, it's not like we're a monarchy and actively exploit our citizens, even though there's probably a shadow government. and it's not like they can harm her. just a casual display of power will dissuade them. maybe taking a bullet to the face? idk.

Louis Nel

I don't think Ilea cares much to work with the government, they can't catch her, hurt her and don't have anything she wants. As much as she denies it she's basically a Goddess. She might help track down missing people but she needs to know the exact location they disappeared from and then go exploring in another realm to track them down which is a long term job and a distraction from the current task.

thkiw

I like the idea of her and the accords working with the governments and them making deals. maybe them(the governments) even joining in secret, the 'accords' sounds like some sort of secret society. maybe cless would become some sort of magical girl? magical girl cless? that's pretty rad. it'll also solve the missing people problem by simply them writing it off. all you gotta say is that "they're working on it" really. we'll all know they'll manage it eventually. it'll still be a pretty good fuel for side stories.

thkiw

I wonder when someone else would find a way back. it's unrealistic for illea to try and keep things quite, out of ten thousands of people someone else should've gained space magic, even if it'll take a while. hell, even cless managed. she was on a path. to point, it's gonna happen anyways, even if half survives. rather heal off that bandage and be over with it quickly. maybe she can work with the united states government to mitigate the damage.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter. I'm sure Claire will want to look at the car and laptop too.

Anon

With the revelations in the last few chapters, if all the missing people didn't get transported to Elos, Earth just became a prime hub for Ilea to travel to other realms using the tear in the fabrics left behind by the gates.

Ausner Gentil

I so loved this chapter. I can’t wait for the next one

Arexio R.

ah i think i love this chapter

fbt

if anything, the empty house and empty cell are two decent candidates for leaving info (if/when she's ready to do that) for the families of the missing.

fbt

why burn the house down? it won't really cover their tracks (no bones, stuff missing, etc). Plus, think of the poor spider!! :)

Gian

It's a dad heist! Let's freaking go! TYFC


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