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Chapter 270

🕑 Added 2025-01-31 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Steven Frey

I never said I dislike slice of life I enjoyed the caravan chapter I don't like pointless filler during a multi chapter pointless beatdown, not to mention of it was so easy to half atep.yoir domain why don't all noble children get suppressed to force a breakthrough

COCOMOJOE

I like the slice of life parts the best.

George McKibbin

Haha I certainly won’t. Keeps me engaged. And they’re writing a book, that’s what makes a page turner, and what makes you jump right into the next book. It’s only frustrating because we get it chapter by chapter but there’s a chapter almost every day so can’t complain tooooo much haha

Magnuss

No for me this chapter killed the hole tension. There is no cliffhanger anymore because we know that 2 more peak tier 5 are coming in to save the day. The plot armor feeling is there with or without this chapter. For the hole arc after the teleport with the princess the story got worse/more predictable. The princess reveal and the kidnapping of her where handled nicely but the hole arc around the challenge rift feels like filler zero real stakes and it feels as if Julius gets more or less carried with the amount of tier 5 help. On top of that the difficulty of the challenge rift was a joke. So the first time now where it was getting a bit interesting with the kidnapping of him two tier 5s are teleporting in for the rescue. Really sad.

Jennifer Leigh

You say that but people get downright mean during a slice of life or set up chapter. Zogarth gets complaints if slice of life things happen or Jake does repetitive, important stuff. . .like training. Of course he has mastered the cliff and if you want to read people freaking out check the god fight. Someone else (can't remember) got seriously boo'd because the released chapter was setting up the scene and giving background before a cliff.

Sean Dawson

I feel like this one was needed. Without it when he is saved we would have nothing showing us how/why they get to him just in time. It’s would feel plot armor even if a later chapter was added showing them doing this as it would feel out of place. If read one at a time yes seems waste but if you read the last chapter and then this one and the next one (rescue assume) together it’s good. Cliffs just change our viewpoint.

Aki Foxtail

This chapter was really well written but I can't put my finger on exactly why. Just know I enjoyed this one way more than any in the last two weeks.

Daniel Hamilton

I agree, well said. It also makes the story more three-dimensional so to speak and adds depth to the characters and helps build the world a story takes a place in.

gray matter

Yeah I think it may have applications for what he was trying to do initially with his thoughts on using kinetic for defense by absorbing all the kinetic energy of attacks. Him and Stella might nerd out on their way back to the academy.

Kbzzy

Crippling arc straight after the last crippling arc would be boring

Chaoticgoose

lmao

gray matter

I already made a long post about all that we learned in this chapter so I’m not gonna repeat it, but disagree. We generally get a lot from POV of the powerful, just not the direct gratification of what we we wanted as readers, that’s a constant for the web novel format. Nothing about this web novel is in any way some wow factor of “I can’t believe I didn’t get what I wanted today” They all do it and it can’t really be helped since you get one chapter at a time. From Rolus’ POV we learned of blood magic. From Cassidus’ two povs we got a look at a few different levels of abilities to include maintaining conversations a mansion away through multiple wards while being able to maintain a magical sensing and monitoring of Julius. From Richard’s POV we got a look into the responsibilities of running a house as well happenings around the empire and things of note that involve how influential Julius’ friends are.

gray matter

I liked this PoV actually. It’s one of the few that aren’t really about Julius. We got introduced to Karmic magic and some of its possibilities (we got introduced to blood magic and some things it’s capable of with Rolus’s small POV too) along with Stella thoughts on null fiends and high tiers abilities to bounce from city to city, we knew about teleportation abilities but not a lot. I acknowledge the extension of the cliff but I thought it was done fine here and I enjoyed this chapter. I like POVs from the powerful sometimes. It’s a good way to expand the world for the reader as well as our knowledge of what’s possible. Especially since our MC likes to find things out the hard way instead of researching in the library or pestering his friend Kyle for answers. Personally I wish Stella’s ramblings were about something that interested me more either magic wise or in the empire, but Julius was interested in how they absorbed mana as well, so maybe it’s a little foreshadowing into a future ability of Julius possibly in combination with his kinetic freeze. I know earlier in his development of the kinetic freeze he wanted to develop some sort of shield or way to rip the kinetic energy out of or absorb from all attacks. TBH I want to know what Marcus thinks when he finds Julius and or watches him heal.

Pedro Manuel Ortiz Valles

I am going to do exactly that.

gray matter

Yeah I’m glad he didn’t get his authority yet, it’s too soon imo. I mean we are what 8ish months away from him figuring out his affinities at tier 1?

gray matter

Which one? He’s done a few which is why I generally catch up on runesmith once every month or two. It’s not just that though. At an every three day release schedule, every main event or training/building arc is about three weeks long.

gray matter

Yeah or complete peak tier 5 who are known for their strength. I agree with you though otherwise the marquis wouldn’t have been as worried. I mean they could just also be peak assets of those two houses indicating the seriousness of Zenith’s and Violet’s interest.

Thomas Grimshaw

Got to love the build up, can't just have two random people turn up and trounce the guy.....

Steven Frey

For the record none of your patreons are gonna unsub if you stop dropping cliff hangers every chapter. In fact MANY would praise you.

Felipe Andrade

Story is awesome, but too many cliffhangers with small chapters is difficult for me to handle. Might need to wait a few weeks to let chapters accumulate.

Radek Homola

I think Marcus and Stella are tier 6...

outlaw

The cliffhangers on top of POV changes are rough man, almost makes me want to ignore the updates everyday and just wait for a few days so that it doesn't keep hitting so often

Kyfe

Called it

Zach

Also Lily you are the best, love you and your terrifyingness

Petr Pavelka

Nah, he still has ways to go, author of Runesmith once made a cliffhanger last for 7 chapters by switching PoV. And Runesmith updates once every 3 days. There was quite an outrage in patreon chat back then :)

Zach

SPACE MAGIC TEACHERS HAVE ARRIVED! I LOVE IT, TFTC. “COME CHILD, LEARN THE MYSTIC WAYS OF SPACE AND TIME” Julius head: “omg this means I might be able to store EVEN MORE baked goods in temporal space. IM IN”

Quasimotolovesbells

Those two are agents of the houses, two of his academy friends arranged to go looking for Julius, I don't think it's specifically said yet but they are like tier 6 or 6+ and are some of the most dangerous fighters on the continent. Seems like the arc is coming to a close, essentially because if they free him they will be making everyone return to school, these two are mentioned by the people Julius was staying with, where he and the princess just tier'ed up.

Corwin

Nice. Now Julius can learn about a space concept as they continue their journey. And please let Marcus absolutely destroy the Bishop quickly.

Zenty

Not another cliffhanger.. Will we have an awkward situation where 3 tier 5s will drop in at the same time? That shadow that's suppose to secretly follow him would be quite useless if he didn't make a move before some external help arrives...

Mitchell Calhoun

Yeah this is waaay less realistic/enjoyable than that option. At least in my opinion.

Mitchell Calhoun

This chapter feels like we learned nothing and it was 100% filler. Should have started it with then saving him or at least end it with then appearing to give something interesting.

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

Thanks for the chapter! You have mastered the art of the cliffhanger haha

Adrian Auriat

totally agree this is cool also it means that there is so much more to discover in circulating the mana like the trolls do

Derek Walker

A triple cliffhanger…

Tom

who is Marcus again?

Pierre Tadrus

Sk?

Magnuss

Don’t know what I should think about the more frequent pov changes some are good but others like this chapter does feel like 99% filler. At least for my taste the povs could get dialed back a bit. On another note thanks for the chapter.

Colby Jordan

Though Julius may be getting some help.. you just KNOW he is going to get grilled by everyone else around him.

DT

I hope there's another chapter tomorrow 🙏

Pierre Tadrus

Oh I was right nice.

Amanda

Yes!! I hope they get him out of that Tier 5’s grasp. And I’m so ready to see what exactly is happening to his emblem. He has what I’m sure the others see as a concerning tendency for self mutilation but he is once again being true to himself!

TUSF

Neat. I figured either House Easton or Marcus & co would happen to stumble upon the fight. It was either this, or either an improvement arc or crippling arc (or both)

Connor Hinrichs

Okay, so these searchers were also foreshadowed in a couple of chapters, but this feels more 'dues ex' than if Hans assassin/shadow affinity agent had interfered

asasasasasas

Oof, yea I was a little worried we were about to have an imprisonment arc. Ew but luckily it isn’t going that way.

TYRELL GRAY

Ohh shit, something is gonna go down.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. House Violet to the rescue !

Rallaster

Ugghhhhh... Cutoff right before it gets good! Now to wait another 24 hours... Lol

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC. I was wondering how Julius would get out of this one.

uthr

For the record, I was interested in the Null Fiends' circulation. Seems like something Julius would adapt for himself.

NinjaSF

Thanks for the chapter

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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