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Chapter 273

🕑 Added 2025-02-04 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Cameron Taylor

Experienced authors seem to resist the temptation to have overlapping POVs of the same scene. It is really hard to do without it being too gimmicky. Working out how to convey the perspectives without crude overlap takes more creative effort but tends to work best.

11037

Can "nevertheless" have the same meaning as "much less" as the author used it here? I think it's just an error, but I'm suddenly not sure.

Hamfist

I liked this chapter a lot. We have been seeing things through Stephanie's eyes and this chapter provides a necessary closure this mini-arc and lets us know that the people we've been following all survived the battle, though some are wounded. It always bothers me when people or things just disappear from the story so this feels necessary to me. Hearing the different characters speculate about what house Julius might belong also provides additional depth to the world which is always a good thing. I know people are whining about POV shifts, but this would have taken just as long if it were told from Julius's POV. Especially since it would have had to cover the same ground but would also have to include him saying his farewells. Better to just have him mysteriously whisked away while the others wonder who he really is. Now when the adventurers get back to town they can get drunk in taverns and start spreading the legend of the unusually powerful boy named Julius.

Daniel Hamilton

I think the reason it feels slow is that we are waiting for the next chapter vs if the book was out you could already read more. This was an issue in the primal hunters nevermore Ark as well and got massive complaints but changed when the arc was complete. The pov helps the world building though. We could also see these characters again in the story down the line so the author is trying to bring them to life more. I personally enjoy them but to each their own. I do understand though there has been quite a lot of alt POV.

Derek Walker

This was a good POV because we’ve been following Stephanie’s group for this mission as well, so it’s nice to see their reaction. Most of the other POVs advanced the plot. The only one off POV that took away was the first Marcus POV, but that was just different and not so much a repetition.

Catherine

I enjoy alternate PoV but they should add something to the story that the mc can’t add. I like Stephanie too and her previous PoV but this one was sort of pointless - I’m not trying to be mean but it added nothing that couldn’t be told through Julius. If she’d actually managed to talk to julius about healing before he left then it would make a lot more sense for this chapter to be from her PoV. Or even if the chapter continued a bit longer to see how they dealt with the caravan after julius and the others left. Again I’m not trying to be rude, I really enjoy this story and I enjoy the other pov that turn up but this one doesn’t really add anything. Just my opinion.

ARandomNomad

I’ve found the huge number of PoV changes make the story feel almost glacial in pace. The writing is good but 3 or 4 perspectives of the same event I feel to be too much. Especially when it’s the same repeated perspectives of a *portion* of a fight or interaction. It’s just too much. I’ll be canceling for a while to let the story progress and hopefully when I return the pacing and PoV switching will have improved.

Tom

It could be the phoenix aspect but I think it's more likely to be his mana spinning technique, or whatever it was the trolls were doing

godkill 99

Yeah i agree it fells like the past 60 chapters were like half julius and halt alt povs

Conrad Manaugh

Enjoy the alt pov

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC

Steven

Some feed back, you have been diving into a lot of different POVs lately. Almost feels the story stalls out. Alt POVs can be good, but when you have more of them than Julius POVs it’s not.

Voral

Also, I hope that in the future Stephanie manages to either get her answer through Julius or by herself!

Orthneil Kelley Jr.

TYFTC!!

Dylan Sutton

This is how the story goes, if you don’t like it this story probably isn’t your cup of tea. Julius is a bit of a simple character, so we need some pov switches so avoid this turning into one punch man.

Xiver

> I really like it but the story doesn’t seem to lend itself well to daily releases I disagree, especially because of the frequency of releases. I've followed creators on Patreon on and of for a long time and I've never followed an author who releases so frequency and consistently. That being said, the story generally moves along at a decent pace if you consider it by week instead of by day. You might be right that it will be a more enjoyable read when it is done and someone can read it from start to finish, but I really don't have any complaints about the current pace.

Magnuss

Yes for the first 150 chapters there where less POV switches then in the last 30 Chapters. Sad that the excellent writing did take a hit after the assassination attempt on the princess. I hope it will be getting better soon or the author should think about reducing his upload schedule. I would gladly take only 3 Chapters a week if there would be back to old quality.

Adrian Auriat

he wouldn’t share his stock with others

Kasim Charles-Walcott

I agree pov switching can be refreshing but too many slow the plot down a lot

Zach

Also shoutout Stephanie for having that fire lit and seeing the very edges of the phoenix, I hope they get to chat again or she keeps progressing down the line. Only disappointment is that when Stephanie was walking up she didn’t see Julius giving the tier 5s hot chocolate 😂

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

silder

Agreed. Still enjoying them, but noticing the drag. I think it’s mostly because of the serial format, but still…

Voral

That's sad, I hope Julius and Stephanie manage to meet again...

Mitchell Calhoun

Yeah I’ve been putting it off but I think I’m gonna cancel for a few months. I really like it but the story doesn’t seem to lend itself well to daily releases. This chapter we essentially learned nothing and the plot was not progressed at all. Even if we see her again in the future this chapter didn’t do much for me . Not so bad when you can just move on to the next chapter, but it stings when you wait all day for it.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. Nice alt POV.

Null void

TFTC. Caught up yesterday after binge reading, delicous breadcrumbs from now on.

Corwin

Oh let Stephanie find out Julius has a phoenix concept...he needs to see if he can teach it to others

Hayden Futch

I feel like nothing has happened in the past week of chapters, just a bunch of POV switches.

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😄

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Zach

TFTC! Omg noooo poor Stephanie 😭😭

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Draven Leal

First TYFTC


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