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Chapter 204

🕑 Added 2024-11-14 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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PikaAndrew

Tftc

P.R. Bakker

The updating of patreon seems to lag behind RR, soon it will make no sense to remain a member

A B

Edit suggestion: beat red -> beet red certainly, not -> certainly not in, to -> in to

gray matter

Jesus Geralt holy side quest what are you doing? I know the timeline isn’t solidified yet so Julius can be doing all of this before she’s attacked, but still are we moving into slice of life or are we in a progression story? I like this story, but I’m sure people want to know I expected the end of year tournament about 40 chapters ago and I feel now we still have more than 80 chapters to go if not more just to start. What is the goal of the story? We are knee deep in side stories instead of time skips for progression fantasy

ThoMiCroN

The old man may even have chosen a favor exactly to trick Julius.

Pete's Place Garage

Well, it's kind of a theme with this story, so far. Tease a plot, then tangent off, never to return.

Pete's Place Garage

They may be more interesting, but the ONLY reason they are there is because of the princess. He never should have left the inn, and really, the farther we get into the story, the worse his decisions become. It is supposed to character PROGRESSION, not REGRESSION.

Random Guy

Yeah cant enjoy this like that shit like that is why I hate POV changes.

Ryan Hall

Honestly, I'm kind of the opposite mind. Feel like the orphans and their mysterious caretaker are far more interesting than another arc with Reinera being a damsel in distress. I kinda wish that Reinera just hadnt been kidnapped at all

Rod

tftc! I know most people want princess rescued, but the kidnapping should teach her a lesson she obviously didn't learn from the couple days leading up to their entrance into the town. I hope you don't make him to feel guilty about her kidnapping, he cannot assume responsibility for everyone, especially since he has unresolved problems with as much risks

ReadingObsessed

Glad I'm not the only one who thought that! I get a strong "let me help you with this problem, stranger! Nm that I orchestrated the problem so we have a karmic connection."

Mantiqore

Huh, some comments seem quite commanding. Let Ryn cook guys

Paul Smith

I’m kind of looking forward to him explaining to the princess that he left her alone to beat up some orphans… Also, maybe move the princess kidnapping PoV to just before it’s revealed? Seems like kind of a big plot to set down.

RedLeaf

Thanks for the chapter!

adam1

If the Elder uses his favor for that, it's obviously contrived, since the only reason Julius isn't there is because the guy grabbed him, and given the sensory skills the guy demonstrated he should be aware of her location easily.

Thaabit Rivertree

While I'm glad he's making a connection to possibly work on a kinetic concept later, i hope we can get back to the princess before too long. Im hoping this is a minor distraction along the way and she wont stay kidnapped for long.

Arrogant Savant

As much as I've enjoyed the last chapters the princess's dumb capture is hovering over the chapters.

Chris Fitzsimons

Hopefully she doesn't go the way of uncle whats-his-name. I genually can't remember his name anymore.

Zenty

He's going to end up wasting the favor because of the princess and it will piss me off so much. I hope I'm wrong.

Sean

The old man reminds me of those smiling monks in xianxia stories that keep saying 'Amitahba stranger' and engineering annoying situations. Like everyone knows their shit stinks but they're not worth engaging with so they get away with it.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter. I kind of wish this was a split POV chapter, Julius/Reinera or Julius/Sarah but, this works too,

Lacrimosa

Yeah dropping a cliffhanger about the princess being kidnapped than posting a bunch of filler chapters kinda a low blow. Please stop posting filler chapters

Zach

TFTC! MANA BOLT TRAINING ARC BEGIN, LETS GO SARAH

Pete's Place Garage

Time to end this. Get to the princess! Beating up orphans seems....pointless.

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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