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Chapter 320

🕑 Added 2025-03-31 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Conrad Manaugh

Deaddum

Greg Beeblebrox

I'm not nit picking the grammar and understand this is a rough draft- so it will PROBABLY be auto corrected- but it never hurts to have a proof reader- or fan base for the series help to provide feedback- i hope. If not please tell me to leave it be and keep the comments to the actual story progression and plot.

Greg Beeblebrox

He had already spent some time cultivating it, but he hasn’t had all that much success. I think hadn't (had not) goes here- but I'm no expert in the intricacies of english tenses and grammar...

Greg Beeblebrox

Thankfully, he had an idea on how he wanted to improve all of those aspects, the problem lied in finding the time to do everything. <-lay is i believe the correct term? thoughts?

Hamfist

No. The next sentence says that it is his first skill so he is clearly talking about [Spatial Perception].

Kemlion

Did you mistakenly list [Spatial Perception] instead of [Spatial Crack] in the paragraph Julius finally makes a decision? Tftc!

funktorial

"On top of this Concept training, he was hoping that if he got a better Sharpness Concept." incomplete sentence I didn't understand

Hamfist

That's basically how he got it in the first place so you're right that it is probably the best way to improve it. I also wonder though, since the system tried to use the sharpness concept with the Epic version of the spatial tear. Maybe he he could improve sharpness and/or the barrier by including a spatial tear as a cutting edge?

Amanda

Thanks for the chapter!! so excited for the finals!!

Derek Walker

It feels like the best way to train his sharpness concept is to only fight using it for the next few matches. Limit himself to using it and barrier of severance.

Tanner Lannister

Or imagine getting close enough to him for a strike and he teleports away and then collapses the spacial rift after he leaves causing a huge explosion. The intermediate version of this is him staying there an tanking the explosion until he figures out how to teleport 😅

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC

Kanyau

TYFTC

Aaron

Some past and present tense mixups, especially in the first half, but otherwise great.

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😁

Kevin McKinney

F that Adam guy …. Thank you!

Hamfist

There are 4 brackets and 16 slots in the finals, meaning that there are 4 people from each bracket that advance to the finals.

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Tyftc

brennon Petersen

Tftc!

gray matter

Are there different rules for the higher brackets (there should be with this current set up), because I believe Derek and Aubrey were in the same bracket and one should’ve knocked out the other.

Voral

Image you finally score a solid hit to the annoying opponent with an absurd movements skills that lets him evade any attack by crossing space and then you see him regen the injury you fully exhausted yourself to give him in an instant while he looks at you with an exited smile. Man I would NOT want to be Julius future opponents 😭 Honestly the only thing Julius is still entirely missing is a method to consistently fly I think. TFTC!

Raymond Mouton

Oops…

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

tiefug

Thanks for the chapter! Did he just leave a random spatial crack lying around?

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Pierre Tadrus

Tftc


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