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Chapter 352

🕑 Added 2025-05-07 19:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Hamfist

The author said in a comment in an earlier chapter that the first time Julius was in a relatively safe area of the void and the second time was in a more chaotic and dangerous area.

Adrian Auriat

just to say but julius wasn t affected to the void went he first got tp there. i like this chaos space concept but i m just lost and i want somebody to explain why. because if we got a julius not affected to the void and purposefully lower this void sheld abilities to experience the void it will be cool.

Caudyr

Probably. Especially since he does have a space concept...although whether it's actually conducive to making one is another matter altogether, given its name, lol.

Caudyr

Nothing indicated that he was going to ask her for advice...just that she came as a nice distraction from his thoughts, lol. Now, will he ask her? Maybe. I do definitely hope he consults Alice, though.

Silver Beard

He's had a few opportunities that most never get. But the bottom line is he is more driven than everyone else. Sure the rich folks think their parents are beating them to death, but they aren't facing truth death if they don't get it together. Julius is. There's a sense of urgency that everyone else just doesn't seem to have. I'm rich, I have money, I'll struggle, but I'll have time, tutors, and my name will pave the way. Julius has none of that... He has to be better. Seems like everyone Julius is associated with Less than T5 has family backing them up. Who does Julius have...really? Good chance his 'family' are the ones trying to kill him.

Ben

Kanyau

To be fair, charging in head first might end up being Julius's unintended (and very permanent) retirement plan 😅

mmarkgraf212

Which, in all honesty, didn’t sound all that bad. He had to admit to himself that he had a *pension* to do stuff like that and the skill would likely fit his style pretty well. - I think you meant penchant.

xXMetrinSlerbaXx

Agreed, if I wanted inner dialogue I would stop taking my meds.

Benjamin Collins

Ty for the filler

Jaklelope

Tyftc

Hamfist

Spatial Crack filled slot 9 so he has 2 spaces available, not 3. I don't think he needs to prove anything to his friends in order to get an invite to join him in those rifts. I think they haven't invited him because they expect him to be back in school when they are delving well into autumn.

Noah

I’m hoping it’d let him walk freely and navigate the Void. Maybe it wouldn’t let him teleport directly, but would let him turn his spatial tear skill into a true portal ability!

Jasen jones

Blue ball'd everytime thanks for the chapter! Just cant get enough I wish I could mind wipe myself and read it all again...

Oskar

Thanks for the chapter 😁

Amanda

So glad he’s considering void step!! i’m curious about what the skill would entail. If he takes it it will be cool. But the others sound great too! Thanks for the chapter!!

Silver Beard

It's time to start filling his skill list. Chpt 304 said 8/11... and he hasn't gained anything new since. Every time Marcus comes up as the one-armed guy- can't help wondering if Julius could create a Pheonix style heal skill for others? We know he can create a basic restore just from mana manipulation. He's got the slots... he should fill one with a potent healing skill. With his Concept; it will make him a viable party member to any higher tier rift. One's he normally couldn't get access too. The tier 2-4 he has now are trash for his development. He needs a challenge; but to get in he needs some utility no one else can offer. His friends are already going; the offer hasn't been made but if he can prove he can fill a role... well.

Alex Galaitsis

Sorry, I’m not interested in chapters where he just thinks about things for 80% of the text. Less telling, more showing and doing please. There are so many potential arcs that I’m excited to see happen.

Radek Homola

Yeah, it is wierd, but she is a T3 now, and not a weak one, so it is beliveable for me atleast

Silver Beard

I agree the chapter was disappointing in its reflection, but it was almost a given. It sucks, but that's how authors make word count sometimes. Would have been great if he'd beelined it to Dante's Cabin and gotten Alice to go over his choices... and finalized one... alas readers rarely get what we want.

Zack

'pension' should be 'penchant'. Pension: retirement pay Penchant: a strong inclination towards something

Zenty

Always followed by half a chapter on all the obviously not viable options.

Adrian Auriat

ouai voila

Some Guy

TFTC

Kyfe

Some constructive criticism: It's time for Julius to stop dithering everytime he gets a new upgrade, for several reasons: 1 - It's a bit of a letdown to the readers at this point. 2 - Character growth and maturity. His personality is becoming more decisive, but not in his own Skill advancement. 3 - He can access his Soul Space where he can see and feel his Skills. If he messes up, he can go into his Soul Space to remove a bad Skill and choose a different one. In fact that would be a good plot point to explore, so maybe you should have him choose a bad Skill on purpose so he can do this. He has already done something similar, just not as precise as this, yet. Now for a personal opinion that's not criticism 😀 You've set up a perfect scenario where Julius could use his Space Skill (forgot the name off the top of my head) to break into the ring, bypassing the restriction and either giving him a new Skill (he has empty slots) and/or advancing his current Space Skill by quite a bit. I hope he thinks to try this.

TUSF

> “Trying not to break into this ring without making it explode,” Should be "Trying to break into...", there should be no "not" there.

Conrad Manaugh

Step of voidy void

Silver Beard

Where's the Princess' shadow? She's allowed the wander the gardens alone. Surely his absolute spatial perception should have picked up on someone?

Silver Beard

Well at least he's holding off on choosing a skill; but I'd rather he sought out Alice than the Princess. Suppose we're going to have to suffer through another round of POV from Lily's Father before we finally get to the meat of the situation. The assassin seems like the type to keep trophies- the ring might hold the answers to any number of eliminations- nothing to Julius but could be big currency for House Violet.

ZeroL

Tftc. Weird tense shift in early paragraph “However, now that he has seen the large number of cool-sounding options in front of him, he is no longer as interested in [Instantaneous Step] as he once was. “

PatronTurtle

Who creates all these rings? Is that something he can learn to do?

HighSocks

Never ending cliffs with the skill selection

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

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Tyftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!


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