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Corrin [Fire Emblem] Weight Gain Sequence - Part 4
🕑 Added 2023-03-08 02:01:13 +0000 UTCDid I go overboard with the text in this one? I try to find a balance between visual and written storytelling, but it's so hard to resist once I've started writing characters talking about the subject's weight behind their back. I get so carried away!
There's just one part left to go! How big do you think Corrin will end up?
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I see what you mean. I gotta work on it in the future. Thanks for the feedback! Glad you still enjoyed the dialogue :)
ARandom Person
The text bubbles do seem a bit crowding, but I enjoy the dialogue!
