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v6c13: Enlightenment Part 2

🕑 Added 2025-03-23 03:47:04 +0000 UTC

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Aune

Hilarious if he ends up in the emperors hands... and finally succeeds in his endeavor. triggering who knows what, or maybe nothing at all.

Victor Segura

An so, we are going to get a twice Emperor. A turbo Emperor. The son of heaven square.

Precentor Van Zandt, Matthew King

Nezin Hu Li was the only mortal to get a slice of the peach that Washy brought back. I wonder how many years extra she got out of it?

Old Dog

That is why I was also wondering if the dances will be passed on. The dances use the formation(s?) to empower the earth spirits. Remember the demon fight where Xiulan got powered up? CF mentioned a couple of earth spirits in neighboring provinces reacting to the beat of the drum.

WolfKnight22

I'll get my unlicensed nuclear accelerator that spirit is gonna be trouble

Melanie Me

I don't think that the formation alone can do it but it needs an earth spirt to help and all of the little spirits are gone and only Tianlan is left.

Srikanth Kotagiri

Counter to the idea of the sprit going to the Emperor, what if it goes to the copy destined for the CSS Archives

Gnmac1985

https://youtu.be/cxJ937Eghrk?si=EE9ANDLdaFh4afem Someone has made a very poor vid of your first book and put it on to YouTube link above.

Zachariah Daugherty

I was thinking the same thing

Timothy Dana

And Earth/Golden Child

Andrew Denton

Also, if her cousin is to be believed, Meimei is a descendant of the Emperor that Xiaoshi overthrew, meaning Zhuye is a hidden prince as well.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

D J Meigs

I’ve been waiting for this since he first asked a rooster if he would emperor! Let’s go meet the current emperor!

Gwyn

I need to see Jin doling out a peach cobbler like it's a normal holiday, only for everyone to wake up the next day feeling all divine-peachy.

The butler did it

I'm sure they'll get some eventually, but no, they have not eaten the Divine Peaches yet

The butler did it

Yes!!!

The butler did it

OMG the Lord Magistrate is going to be so funny! But he (and his wife) will certainly enjoy the benefits

StarBat

EmperorxShenguashi interaction next chapter! Everyone say it with me!

Krisjanis Jansons

Not corupted but created with singular goal that defines its existence. It only exists to achieve that and evryting else is secondary. Honestly I am suprised it hasnt been more force full in its efforts to fufil its purpose.

Chris

I still think the spirit is corrupted.

Often Irrelephant

Yes - honest-appraisal-from-someone-without-agenda is great. But as an elder nerd (hi, Shou!) I now think the best compliments are those from Jin to Mei - honest, sincere, and with no agenda, because they love you too much to do that to you. Like Mei, I still think my "dear" is insane to think I'm attractive. But after 20+ years, they've proved that they mean what they say, compliment or criticism. (Only mentioning because my own before times had me convinced that no one could be that nice, lol. A ginko leaf of hope, for anyone who needs it.)

taukid

Lol, can't wait for "would you become the emperor" ".... I am the emperor" 😂

Often Irrelephant

Quest giver, unlocked!

leopard eye

Nha we'd have to have Jin or someone else wonder what would have happened if he'd gone to yellow rock or what farming there would have been like

Mitch McNair

I waiting for the elders to put the pieces together and realize Jin is on the path of shennong. Gramps figured it out when he saw Jin give to the earth and Shou is clearly familiar with the original and his teachings, so even if not this visit they will put the pieces together. With them seeing the crystal I could also see them guessing why Jin is being secretive about it (to protect the earth spirit) and keeping it quiet.

forest tate

There was one. When xiulan channeled the formation, the yellow rock plateau earth spirit from that AU made an appearance. Does that count?

matthew gilley

Honestly, I thought the plan from the beginning was to give the original to the emperor. I have been thinking of that moment for books now. Giggle Everytime

forest tate

TLM: I can't wait til I get a bit older and can take it easy. No more having to outrun my guards, no expectations, just a slow slide to a long quiet retirement. Jin: teacher you really have to try these new peaches! Seriously glad Xian and uncle che will be able to keep doing the dragon dance for years longer

ItWasIDIO!!

Yes but he could also start something he's insane & glitchie & the Emporer has stated that he's willing to get rid of loyal followers to appease powerful assholes to keep the empire running also he believes he may have to fight Shen Yu one day

James C

"Do you want to be the Emperor?" / "No, but I've been lumbered with the job anyway 😞"

Old Dog

As always, thank you for the chapter. So the question is: When Shenguashi "meets" the emperor and the emperor "agrees", will Shenguashi gift him the knowledge of the formation and dances to "re-empower" the land/help repair the Qi voids?

Geoffrey Sullivan

And Shenguashi will *have* his future Emperor - because what's more "main character" than THAT . . .? :)

Gwyn

So I have an idea. Zhuye has so much main character energy already, thanks to his upbringing. Jin is not the guy who's gonna travel the world restoring the Qi wastes and healing whatever this world's version of Gaia is. But the boy who's the son of the new shennong and the healing sage, brother to a celestial rooster and a dragon, growing up beloved by the spirits of the earth. Give it 16 years and I'm seeing Zhuye and his friends going on some crazy adventures, healing the land wherever they go.

Old Dog

That would be awesome. And gift a bottle to Master Forest Sweeper.

Baqc∞ART

I also didn't say that I entered it intentionally, but rather in the process of listening to the spirit,

Gray Code

@BeepBoop Meiling is indeed on the Path of Shennong along with Jin. She's taking the Shennong Dream Correspondence Courses, she's using Shennong techniques, and getting info dumps, Tianlan thinks of her as "her Meiling" in webserial v3c18 "Reach out", and it's been stated by CF on the Discord in the #patreon-chapter-channel

Gray Code

The ones who definitely ate the heavenly peach Wa Shi brought back are Wa Shi (of course), Jin, Meiling, Gou Ren, Tigu, Ri Zu, Chunky, Pi Pa, Xiulan, and Hu Li (who was visiting at the time) Yun Ren was making his first visit to Pale Moon Lake City at the time, Bi De was on his Formation Investigation Adventure, and hadn't brought back Yin or Miantiau yet. Bei Be and Vajra hadn't yet been revealed to be Spirit Beasts, so also probably weren't included.

WarStrider72

I thought the sneaky spirit would have been Tianlan playing a prank on Elder Ge. But I think most scholars would treat the crystal spirit as your typical npc

forest tate

It gives mortals 10 to 100 years, what does it do for cultivators?

Linkneo5

Lol the spirit is going to ask the actual emperor to be the emperor

SilasDrekken

I figure Jin’s son may start a farm there. And so on and so forth with his lineage reviving all of the qi wastes.

litalmexy

Was with the idea of being able to of better quality technique makes better products which makes better overall crops. Story has lead to his crops are better in every way due to how he nurtures them.

Daniel Gesualdi

He is going to the emperor to ask if he wishes to be the emperor... I lost five minutes giggling over this like a loon. Good job.

dragonslaver

I mean Mr spirit is gonna aks the emperor if he wants to be emperor

ItWasIDIO!!

Don't start nothing mr insane spirit

Kat

If she is remembering dream lessons from an old man, she may already fully be on the path of Shennong (? Hmm, spelling? 🤔)

Kat

Very good point - even if he’s honourable and trusts them, it’s still nice to hear it like that… (Reminds me of my theory that a compliment from a stranger is almost better, because they have no reason to lie to you - this random spirt complaining how no one wants to be emperor is a pretty good indication without flattery or lies haha)

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

Hunendora

I'm presuming the spirit knows everything contained in the crystal. Everything they've been careful to keep secret. Even if it makes it to the Emperor, it might make for more than comedy.

leopard eye

First a SHI AU reference now an unbroken AU reference. All we are missing now is a Yellow rock one and we're done

Matt Grayson

Hmmm. Everything IS connected.

Angua de Blubb

I really hope Shenguashi will get to feel that he fulfilled his purpose. He's been so faithful for so long 🩵💙

Ken Horne

I think the emperor is about to get evidence no one at Fa Rm wants his job, which will help keep peace. When the Spirit says I keep trying to make people emperor and they turn me down.

Saaski

Heheh 😏 I was waiting for something like that to happen. 😂 Can’t wait to see Shenguashui’s upcoming meeting; “🤩Will you be Emperor?” “I am the Emperor.” It will either go brilliantly or end in despair. No in between.

BeepBoop

I don't know whether Mei is bound to the path, but she is definitely far more invested in, with a far stronger forged connection, than all but Jin. It has been noted by Shen Yu that Mei varies with an upper limit in the Earth Realm, much like he judged Jin, and we know that she had a very high level of power in the battle (though not directly combat oriented in a straightforward way) in a way that other defenders did not access.

Truedragon5374

If the Emperor won't come to the Spirit, then the Spirit will come to the Emperor!

Cranky Otter

Looking forward to seeing where the Dragon Veins knowledge goes wrt the decline of the empire and whether or not the following quote of Shen Yu’s will be true: “The world has been this way for thousands of years. It shall not drastically change in the first days of new information meeting old theories.”

Cranky Otter

I thought it was because Yukong gave advice for improving his qi infusing formation ?

Cranky Otter

Those were local peaches from Xiulan’s wedding gift peach trees. The fancy divine trees Jin planted haven’t fruited yet.

Cranky Otter

It was already good that everyone shared the Divine Heavenly Peach, but now we know it’s even better that they shared. I’ve been assuming that peach trees need 2 or more of the same type to properly fruit, which is why Washi bringing back 2 plantable pits was important, and why he was told to take only one- without the 2nd tree, could it even produce the special peaches?

Nicholas Tran

If the theory of reviving the qi waste is true then It could be the next adventure for bi de. His family is the only one known to gently revive a dragon vein. What if they travel to revive the dragon veins as they recover. This could also allow them to discover why the demons messed those areas up so badly.

Lanter

Shou: Ah, a humblebrag, finally a Shen Yu trait. 🤣

tyler clifton

Well from what I remember Mei isn't bound to the path of shennog. So so still has a chance for immortality. But knowing the way this author seems to like to do things it would not surprise me if he threw both jin and tianlan a bone. After all, tianlan has already broken the rules set by the path before.

D375

I could also see Jin making alcohol from the peaches down the road. Peach schnapps derived from divine peaches could give Vajra's honey/mead a run for the money.

BeepBoop

It is also a significant advantage though as it will be at least a little more lifespan for a pair who cannot continuously expand their lifespan through cultivation and is ultimately limited. Even a bit more time can do plenty of good.

Ian Robert Darling Burns

...Random age extension. For both Jin and Mei. They just greatly extended how long they'll have to live apart from each other with no idea by how much. Well damn, now they'll HAVE to ascend the entire province...

Fiona

Yes. Early in book three Jin goes to get his rice graded by the lord magistrate. After Jin has left for Pale Moon city the Lord Magistrate is looking at the produce Jin left behind and his wife feeds him a peach.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Michael Larsen

You can’t enter it intentionally.

Mad Max

Because she's getting lessons from the God of Agriculture, along with her husband

Aesoir

I think this method is to address both elephants. The spirit pledging to the emperor is one long foreshadowed plot line. And the emperor needs to become aware of the importance of the path of shennog. Possibly even for himself.

Jacob

Oh man I can already see a future chapter (spirit to the emperor) "will you be the new emperor" " ha I already am"

Michael Wheaton

I wonder if the spirit will help the Emperor break through his cultivation bottleneck, a reason for him to throw resources at the azure hills

Kasinki

Damnn, thanks for the chapter! Will love to see how the crystal spirit thread ends

Ligeia

Thanks for the chapter, CF! Very thought- provoking, plus of course providing the possibility of future hilarity! Should be fun & funny! As for thought-provoking, did the demonic cultivators hook up to the dragon veins, constantly sucking up huge quantities of qi and keeping the wastes qi-less? It's an interesting idea! And unrelated to this chapter, I was reading old, not-yet-published chapters today and discovered something -- when Ri Zu & Shen Yu's folks arrive at the foxes' brothel for the first time, there were a couple of sentences during that short period where Ri Zu refers to herself in the first person as "I", which she never does. Sorry I didn't note the chapter # but it's in that section of ǰust a few chapters. You may have already noticed it since I think it'll be in book 5, but if you haven't, I just wanted to alert you.

BeepBoop

The spirit might just end up creating more comedy, but sometimes the seriousness and consequences in this story sneak up on you. There might be hijinks in the meantime, but there already exists a potential long-term major antagonist that considers himself a sort of fated ruler. The fact that they are so dismissive of this spirit's purpose at this point might come back to bite them somehow, perhaps spreading certain pieces of information they would prefer wasn't spread.

Rieverre

Memories make it to the Emperor. Spirit: Do you want to be Emperor? Emperor: ... bruh ...

KnightRider007

Oh that would be nice.

Timothy Dana

Why would the crop taste improve?

Bi-Dailey

You know what, I'm happy for the Spirit because in all likelihood the second crystal will actually find its way to the Emperor

Dirk Gent Lee

I really hope this ends in the emperor being offered the position of emperor lol

Kennith Kenif.

So does anyone remember if Jin has provided peaches to the Lord Magistrate of Verdant Hill? I wonder if that will keep our dear friend going and alive for a number of more years? He has the luck to hit max on his d100 roll.

Emily Gurnavage

As Tayler said, they tried. The Spirits sole purpose in life is finding a NEW Emperor and an already existing one won't stop that compulsion from driving him. Artificial life has to deal with the hand its dealt.

Emily Gurnavage

Im thinking the spirit is splitting rather than bailing entirely. Could be wrong though.

South

I want the little spirit to actually get to be happy instead of tormented by a purpose it can't resolve or (seemingly) choose to move past. I feel Shenguashi has been much more tragic than funny for a while.

jord

Oh I really hope that the Emperor gets asked if he wants to be the Emperor, and he takes it as a more philosophical "is this what you really want to do with your life" and waxes poetic about the mantle of responsibility and the necessity of a reliable leader in these dangerous times. Then realize what the crystal is actually asking and be like "yeah, I want to be the Emperor, I AM the Emperor" and boom, purpose fulfilled. Could be funny

Joanna

I do wonder, obviously it'll be hilarious when Shenguashi asks the Emperor to be Emperor. But does this mean that the Emperor will end up getting the whole story from the spirit, instead of just the Cliff's Notes version they intend to send him? And will that have significant repercussions?

Haley Shepard

Bi De did show Shenguashi a map of the CPE and say there is already an Emperor ruling the entire thing. Shenguashi started thinking about whoever accepted the mantle needing to become the Emperor of the CPE. It's not about the existence of an Emperor of the Azure Mountains, but for Shenguashi to select an Emperor and train them to fulfill Xiaoshi's legacy and throne. Because Shenguashi isn't a person, it's a partially broken construct.

Keliana Tayler

They've tried. His response was to say that the existing emperor could be overthrown

litalmexy

The curiosity of how much the crops taste will improve and potency of mei’s pranks after the lessons. Was hoping for steam boy to get a lessons or study material also

Akki

I expect the crystal the spirit ends up in is the one The Emperor gets.

Melanie Me

Oohh.... I hope he goes in the crystal headed for the Emperor

Angel

Oooh sneaky little spirit is going to cause some mischief! 😂 And finally Shou discovers the peaches. 👏🤣 So much fun, thank you! Plus, the more I read Ge’s perspective, the more I really like him. The sheer number of wonderful characters in this story make me so damn happy.

Arnon Parenti

Emperor: oh, another one? Adds the stone to a formation holding a dozen similar spirits.

Gandalf_Flame_Of_Anor

Incompatible on basis of corrupted Qi of yulong etc

Synova Vitale

I wonder if they will notice that he goes missing. That should be fun. Bringing home the way ward spirit.

mhaj58

Why hasn’t anyone explained to him that there’s already an emperor who is doing the best he can with what he has

Voror

So either this finds it's way ti the Enperor who simply agrees on the basis he already is the Emperor. Or Mei's uncle somehow gets a hold of it.

Baqc∞ART

I knew that would happen, who knows, maybe the emperor will enter the Shenong path

Aki_Iokua18

Will you become the Emperor?” “I refuse…Thank the Heavens I FINALLY got to say it!” Fengyan most likely. Here’s hoping this doesn’t become a seed of future trouble. Shame it seems Shen Yu won’t get the double pleasure of show off his cock to the Imperial Court as while simultaneously delivering matters of great importance. Hopefully the former will still happen.

Red Viking

Wait... that copy is actually meant for the emperor, isn't it? XD

PickledTink

He's going to ask the Emperor if he wants to be Emperor. It'll be great.

ben regnard

I thought that might be the solution - if the emperor will not come from the spirit, send the spirit to the emperor.

That Guy

Sneaky spirit indeed

Anime Problem

Lol the spirits on it's way to meet the emperor. This is gonna be one of the funniest interactions ever.

Cml1022

It would be cool if the spirit actually interacts with the emperor. From what you’ve shown of the emperor so far he would be entertained by it and probably use it to productively. It’s weird that competent leadership in stories is so rare that this is a breath of fresh air.

Corwin Amber

That the current emperor isn't as powerful as the previous one(s); perhaps the crystal will be able to show him how to become more powerful for the betterment of the empire :)

Bruno Vieira

He will talk to the emperor lol

Seaspike

Woot, the spirit will get to meet the Emperor.

linkhyrule5

> damaged the people’s very souls and addled their minds to the point where most went mad,” Missing speaker here. Oh boy. Shenguanshi might get himself into trouble... then again, he *is* going to see the actual Emperor, so maybe he'll get his wish at last.

Cam

What a sneaky spirit!

jeffrey niski

Lol the spirit sneaks off and meets the current emperor who says sure why not. I'm already the emperor anyway.

Andrew Denton

Yes! Offer the throne to the existing emperor!

Cam

Tftc!!

Rake1810

She guashi meets the emperor who agrees to be emperor.

Harish

It's going to be ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS when Shenguashi ends up right with THE EMPEROR. "WHY!!!" - The Spirit cried as the literal Emperor stood before him, rendering his purpose moot.

Seiden Kyoukai

Spirit: WOULD YOU LIKE TO BE THE EMPEROR!?!?!? Emperor: ...

NameGame

Darn it all to heck. I dawdled. I found the chapter before the notification by sheer chance...and paid the price for my slothful ways by missing first.

JohnJohn2195

The emperor gets his own chat gpt to help him rule better

Julia Pennoyer

One minute too late. Keep trying, you'll get there.

Julia Pennoyer

Yes! Find your Emperor!

Randall Norman Pick

And rampancy claims another AI.

Katharine Gould

Thanks for the chapter boss!

NameGame

First?

Zharina

Thanks for the chapter!


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