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Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2024-02-21 16:12:28 +0000 UTC

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Sam S

"To his defence, ..." -> In his defence, I have never heard "To his defence,..." used in American English, other countries may have different word usage. I just wanted to point it out because the writing seemed strange.

Arthor K

Oh man I'm so sorry. Early chapters are very very rough. It should be much better in the Kindle version

Sam S

"...from the eeaver..." eeaver -> weaver


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