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Chapter 504 – Stalker

🕑 Added 2025-11-03 07:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Rodmin

Loved this chapter!

ItWasIDIO!!

Alright lady you aren't a grade A asshole but you're fighting to jump up a couple grades you better at least stick around to find out the shit Remoir is in with the Starries

Karait

It's a yes and no situation she had no way to know that micky dieing would kill percy

No

I also think that the first four and a half chapter of book 5 should be condensed a little bit. Although it may be fine when you can just binge read them with the full book, but it feels quite slow when you have to wait a day just for one of those chapters. Absolutely loving the story though, one of my favorite series I've read.

No

Phoebe's thoughts on things is a way better way to start book 5, rather than opening a book and reading a couple chapters of Percy figuring out what happened and reading his status. I don't know what your plan is for after Phoebe's perspective, but in the final draft of the book I think they should be swapped around with the book opening to Phoebe and then Percy's gains.

Shiloh Gallaher

I deffenatly agree that this shuld have been the first chapter in the book

Sloth

Ah, I didn’t even pick up on that. Yes, that could be very interesting

Sloth

They need air, so maybe they need to eat too? As for sleep… maybe? If only to make the spectral trait useful even for gods?

Alexander Dupree

This chapter really feels like it should have been the first one of the book and definitely not stopped there since the whole chapter is information we already have. It’s just a recap really.

NetWon

She kind of did let Percy die... This chapter kind of feels like the start of a retcon.

Maurice Jenter

Do gods need to sleep and eat?

Derze

Yay! Phoebe! I’ve been hoping for a chapter from her for a while. Very interesting how her goals differ from Percy. We correctly guessed she was using Percy status to improve her own decree, cool. Do wonder when the updated version will hit everyone in Remior. Tomorrow’s chapter ,assuming it continues from her PoV, going to be good.

Dove

“ …unless Percy found a way to dig the buried potential out of his soul and grant the missing features to his clones – like he did with the second cores.” That’s awesome. I’ve always wondered why he was able to pass on one decree but not others, and based on this, it seems the answer is he WANTED to pass it on, so he did. The others, he wasn’t sure about or just didn’t think he could. So fascinating to think how this might evolve as the story progresses.

mapts

actually I wanna expand on that, bestiality isn’t necessarily the right word (though I feel that too). When Percy started his relationship, it was him and nesha. Now, by his own words, percy doesn’t exist anymore. Even if he goes back to her and pretends to still be percy it’s honestly dishonest and creepy. Nesha didn’t sign up to be a mutated thruple. Whether he tells her or not this relationship is absolutely fucked. Half of him is not percy and micky sure as hell doesn’t have the hots for some human. The only way this story can go from here in that regard is to definitively terminate any sort of romance, which sucks in its own way. Sorry for all the negativity, I still love the story but I feel like this causes so many problems that you might not have accounted for

Private Writer

Mind mana is rust red, if I remember correctly.

Feindin for readin

I thought the mind pool was purple, could be wrong though.- edit I was wrong

ZaA

People are saying too short. While I share the sentiment.. they're always too short for me (; ty for the chapter Mr author.

mapts

This feels like half a chapter, it kinda just cut off. Anyways, fuck her for letting micky die, I hope percy doesn’t forgive her for that cause I honestly hate the merger. It feels like percy’s character is dead, the whole story we’ve had a main character and suddenly it’s just a different person. It feels really disappointing as a reader, I hope they separate in the future. Any relationship with nesha now just feels like weird bestiality.

Alex

Great story. But I hate having to wait for the next chapter!

MinE

Also Interesting we've got information that Decree's can be modified after deployment, and it absorbing other Decree's wasn't actually intended and was just a side benefit of its adaptability; I wonder what feature she is intending to add that requires such adaptability.

MinE

I more surprised she let Mikey "die". I mean she should know by know how close they are. Its possible she had some way of saving Mickey before the whole Devil transformation began, but it still seems an unnecessary risk if she was going to step in to save Percy anyway.

MinE

Interesting that Phoebe's block seems to work by blocking Percy's connection to the Decree rather than anything even resembling mind control.

mant06

I wonder if Phoebe was stabilising Percy and Micky mentally after their fusion?

Meir Banon

Tftc

Bryce Oakes

Really like the Phoebe POV. Seems odd that she will watch Percy almost die though. I guess a God has a little more leeway when it comes to timing?

Michael Herold

yeah it was good and interesting but too short

Poutine Au Syrop d'érable

Nice. But that whole thing shoulda been one chapter. Too short. Though, I do understand the difficulty of doing 1 chapter a day. And I don't want to squeeze you. That'd be horrible. Cya tomorrow.


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