Anamadic
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From Now On - NEW Book 2 chpt 1 pt 2
🕑 Added 2023-11-05 07:29:01 +0000 UTC Thanks everyone that gave me constructive criticism for the last part. I'm much happier with this version and it would've been a flop without you! I took many shortcuts the first time and I made sure to take my time and rethink the whole scene. I feel it's more impactful and now sets up events that will recur later in the series.
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Anamadic
Thank you!
UberOctavian
It's Perfect! Great job
Anamadic
Thanks for your help!
Technosavy6758
This version is much better, it has a much greater impact. I am excited for what comes next!!
