Onlyreon
John Torred from patreon
John Torred patreon

Breaking Fat part 2_c

🕑 Added 2023-08-27 12:31:07 +0000 UTC
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c
Breaking Fat part 2_c

Comments

John Torred

Oh, I think Mel herself would be pleasantly surprised to read such a comment about her legs ;) Maybe yes, we need to add more intermediate stages. But I think that at this moment everything that happened to them happened under their clothes and now they will be more attentive to their bodies, especially Mel! I think she hasn't had time to fully realize what happened to her (and to Ben, too), but very soon the first shock will pass and they will look at themselves in a completely different way. In fact, they are both still at the very beginning of the journey and many new discoveries are waiting for them ;)

LucaG

First of all I will say I really like that first frame, a pair of solid and strong looking legs, nice touch ;) I've very much enjoyed the slow rolling of this comic, to the point that this first transformation was unexpected, to me at least, I thought (and hoped) there would be more intermediate stages, but they're already pretty stacked and taller than the start. Not an actual problem though, that medicine surely is strong! What I feel is missing right now is an exploration/admiration phase, I mean they might not have felt the changes but they can clearly see them and touch them; especially Mel, I don't think she's ever been so fit, furthermore she sounded so desperate about losing weight in the first issue and now she's got it and far more!! She should be wayyy more excited about her new figure. Also, as another comment previoulsy pointed out, I'm glad to see a larger/heavier frame as a starting point, it matches my tastes. Thank you for this. Looking forward for the next part.


More Creators