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PBV : Test Page 2
🕑 Added 2020-07-30 17:38:05 +0000 UTCOop, did another one. Deffo feeling a bit more confident, but its nooooot quite there yet
THINGS TO CHANGE:
- Develop a cleaner line of action / Starting point
- Flesh out BG linework a bit more tighter
- Adjust lettering so its more condensed
Any feedback is greatly appreciated! If anything seems off, let me know!
Comments
luzzy
again the flow in this is great, the way my eyes moved through the text bubbles naturally creates action and it looks so clean, and that last panel is sick
Delightfully snazzy work!
